Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to use correct grammar and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of "I love to sing it because it's give me so much pleasure," say "I love singing because it gives me great pleasure." Also, avoid repeating the same idea; one clear reason is enough.

Example: Yes, I love singing because it gives me great pleasure and allows me to express my emotions clearly.

Suggestion: Focus on clarity and correct grammar. Avoid unclear phrases like "learned to my UH." Also, use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, "When I was a kid, I learned singing from my teacher because he was interested in teaching me. As a result, I practiced traditional songs like Amarshona Bangla and Amar Padanaja."

Example: When I was a kid, I learned singing from my teacher because he was passionate about teaching. Therefore, I practiced traditional songs such as Amarshona Bangla and Amar Padanaja.

Suggestion: Use correct grammar and avoid repetition. For example, instead of "try new new song," say "try new songs." Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Example: I want to sing for my husband because I love him and want to express my feelings through songs. Therefore, I always try to learn new songs.

Suggestion: Improve sentence structure and clarity. Avoid confusing phrases like "there are numerous songs where I can we can bring happiness." Instead, say "Yes, singing can bring happiness to people because it allows us to share joy and appreciate others."

Example: Yes, singing can bring happiness to people because it allows us to share our joy and appreciate others through music.

× Yes, I love to sing it because it's give me so much pleasure and I can explain my emotion while I singing.

✓ Yes, I love to sing it because it gives me so much pleasure and I can explain my emotion while I am singing.

The verb 'give' should be in third person singular form 'gives' to agree with the subject 'it'. Also, 'while I singing' is incorrect; it should be 'while I am singing' to use the present continuous tense correctly.

× When I was kid, I learned to my UH from my teacher.

✓ When I was a kid, I learned to sing from my teacher.

The phrase 'When I was kid' is missing the article 'a' before 'kid'. Also, 'learned to my UH' is unclear and likely a typo; it should be 'learned to sing' to make sense.

× He was interested to teach me.

✓ He was interested in teaching me.

The correct expression is 'interested in' followed by a gerund ('teaching'), not 'interested to' plus verb.

× So that's why I did some traditional songs like Amarshona Bangla and Amar Padanaja.

✓ So that's why I sang some traditional songs like Amarshona Bangla and Amar Padanaja.

The verb 'did' is not appropriate with 'songs'; the correct verb is 'sang' to indicate performing songs.

× I want to sing for my husband, I love him and I want to express my feelings with song.

✓ I want to sing to my husband, I love him and I want to express my feelings through song.

The correct preposition with 'sing' when indicating the audience is 'to', not 'for'. Also, 'express my feelings with song' should be 'express my feelings through song' to convey the means properly.

× So that's why I always want to try new new song.

✓ So that's why I always want to try new songs.

The noun 'song' should be plural 'songs' because 'new' implies more than one, and 'new new' is a repetition error.

× Yes, there are numerous songs where I can we can bring happiness to people, we can share our joy with singing and we can appreciate other in this way.

✓ Yes, there are numerous songs through which we can bring happiness to people, share our joy with singing, and appreciate others in this way.

The phrase 'where I can we can' is redundant and incorrect; 'through which we can' is better. Also, 'appreciate other' should be 'appreciate others' to match plural form.