Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to be more direct and clear, and avoid redundancy. Use simple and correct sentences to express your feelings about singing.

Example: Yes, I like singing very much because it helps me relax and feel calm. I enjoy singing songs by my favorite singers, which makes me happy.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and has grammatical mistakes. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas and be more concise. Also, avoid incomplete sentences.

Example: No, I have never taken singing classes, but if I get the chance in the future, I would definitely like to learn because singing can make people happy.

Suggestion: Your answer is good but can be improved by using better linking words and correcting grammar. Also, try to avoid redundancy and be more specific.

Example: Firstly, I like to sing for myself because it helps me feel happier and more relaxed. Besides that, I enjoy singing for my loved ones, such as my parents, siblings, best friends, and my partner.

Suggestion: Your answer has some good ideas but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to express your thoughts more clearly and use linking words to connect your ideas.

Example: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because sometimes people cannot express their feelings in words. Singing allows them to share their emotions with others, which is very meaningful.

× I also like to sing songs of my favorite singers whom I listen the most and because it's really beneath my mind and help me to make myself calm.

✓ I also like to sing songs by my favorite singers whom I listen to the most because it really soothes my mind and helps me to calm myself.

The preposition 'of' is incorrectly used with 'songs'; the correct preposition is 'by' when referring to the creator of songs. Also, 'listen' requires the preposition 'to'. The phrase 'beneath my mind' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'soothes my mind'. Additionally, subject-verb agreement is corrected from 'help' to 'helps' to match the singular subject 'it'.

× No, I have never taken classes about how to do singing, but if I get an opportunity in the future, I will definitely want to grab it because I think that it is really good for a people to do singing because it's really helped them to stay happy and.

✓ No, I have never taken classes on how to sing, but if I get an opportunity in the future, I will definitely want to grab it because I think that it is really good for people to sing as it really helps them to stay happy.

The phrase 'how to do singing' is incorrect; the correct form is 'how to sing'. The article 'a' before 'people' is incorrect because 'people' is plural and does not need an article. The modal verb phrase 'will definitely want to grab it' is acceptable but can be improved for clarity. The phrase 'it's really helped' is changed to 'it really helps' to maintain present tense consistency. The sentence was incomplete and has been completed for clarity.

× I love to sing a song for the people whom I love the most, such as my parents, my siblings, my best friends and the love of my life.

✓ I love to sing songs for the people whom I love the most, such as my parents, my siblings, my best friends, and the love of my life.

The phrase 'sing a song for' is acceptable but 'sing songs for' is more natural when referring generally. Also, a comma is added before 'and' in the list for clarity. No preposition error here but improved for naturalness.

× First of all, I will definitely want to sing for myself because it's really helped me to feel more happier and relaxed.

✓ First of all, I will definitely want to sing for myself because it really helps me to feel happier and more relaxed.

The phrase 'more happier' is incorrect because 'happier' is already a comparative adjective; 'more' is redundant. The verb tense is corrected from 'helped' (past) to 'helps' (present) to match the ongoing effect. The order of adjectives 'happier and more relaxed' is corrected for naturalness.

× Yes, I think that thinking can bring happiness to people because there are some words and feelings that people not are not able to say.

✓ Yes, I think that singing can bring happiness to people because there are some words and feelings that people are not able to express.

The word 'thinking' is incorrect in context; it should be 'singing'. The phrase 'people not are not able to say' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'people are not able to express'. The verb 'say' is replaced with 'express' for better meaning.

× They can express that feeling by singing a song for the people whom they want to say and it is the best thing.

✓ They can express those feelings by singing a song for the people they want to express them to, and it is the best thing.

The phrase 'whom they want to say' is incorrect; it should be 'people they want to express them to'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.