Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to use the correct tense and avoid redundancy. For example, say "I like singing because it helps me relax and focus on what I'm doing." Also, keep your answer concise and natural.

Example: I like singing because it helps me relax and concentrate on my tasks.

Suggestion: Use correct grammar and clearer expressions. Instead of "I don't actually learn for singing," say "I haven't formally learned how to sing." Also, avoid repetition and clarify your ideas.

Example: I haven't formally learned how to sing, but I often listen to music and follow the rhythm, which helps improve my singing skills.

Suggestion: Use correct verb forms and clearer sentence structure. For example, say "I really enjoy singing for my puppy because they are adorable and I love them. When I see them, songs come to my mind." Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas.

Example: I really enjoy singing for my puppy because they are adorable and I love them. Whenever I see them, songs start playing in my head.

Suggestion: Make your answer more coherent and clear. For example, say "Of course, singing brings happiness because it is fun and allows people to express their emotions. The sound of singing is like a treasure to humans." Avoid vague phrases and improve sentence flow.

Example: Of course, singing brings happiness because it is enjoyable and helps people express their feelings. The sound of singing is like a treasure to us.

× I like singing because it helped me to relax and focus on the thing that I'm doing.

✓ I like singing because it helps me to relax and focus on the things that I'm doing.

The sentence mixes past tense 'helped' with present tense 'I'm doing'. Since the student is talking about a current habit, present tense 'helps' is appropriate. Also, 'thing' should be plural 'things' to match the context.

× I don't actually learn for singing, but I always listen to music and follow the rhythm though it it approve my singing skill.

✓ I don't actually learn to sing, but I always listen to music and follow the rhythm though it improves my singing skill.

The phrase 'learn for singing' is incorrect; the correct form is 'learn to sing'. The verb 'approve' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'improve' to indicate enhancement of skill. Also, 'it it' is a typo and should be 'it'.

× I really enjoy to sing for my puppy because they're really adorable and I love them so much and when I see them the song play in my head.

✓ I really enjoy singing for my puppy because they're really adorable and I love them so much, and when I see them, songs play in my head.

The verb 'enjoy' should be followed by a gerund ('singing'), not an infinitive ('to sing'). Also, 'the song play' is incorrect; it should be 'songs play' to agree in number and make sense. Commas are added for clarity.

× I really enjoy to sing for my puppy because they're really adorable and I love them so much and when I see them the song play in my head.

✓ I really enjoy singing for my puppy because they're really adorable and I love them so much, and when I see them, songs play in my head.

The singular 'song' does not agree with the plural subject implied by 'songs play'. Using 'songs' plural matches the idea of multiple songs playing in the head.

× Of course it does, because singing is quite fun, and the tone and voice and it's kind of treasure for humans.

✓ Of course it does, because singing is quite fun, and the tone and voice are kind of treasures for humans.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'and' repeatedly and lacks subject-verb agreement. 'Tone and voice' is plural, so the verb should be 'are'. Also, 'treasure' should be plural 'treasures' to match the plural subject.