Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is good in expressing your feelings about singing, but it has some redundancy and hesitations. Try to make your sentences more concise and avoid repeating phrases. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, instead of repeating 'sing a song' multiple times, you can say 'singing helps me express my feelings clearly and connect with others creatively.'

Example: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me express my feelings clearly. Whenever I feel stressed, I sing to relax and connect with others through creative ideas. After a tough day, singing always makes me feel better.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but contains many hesitations and some grammatical errors. Try to speak more fluently and use correct tense and sentence structure. Also, avoid repeating phrases unnecessarily. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Example: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in school. I used to sing with my teacher, and we had a lot of fun learning together.

Suggestion: Your answer is quite good and includes supporting details. However, there are some grammatical mistakes and minor hesitations. Try to use correct sentence structures and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Also, use linking words like 'because' and 'additionally' effectively to connect your ideas.

Example: I would like to sing for my family and close friends because their support and appreciation motivate me to perform better. Additionally, sharing music with loved ones creates a warm and joyful atmosphere that strengthens our bond.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to give more specific reasons and examples. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'make a group' and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to explain your points clearly.

Example: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because it is enjoyable and helps people bond. For example, friends often sing together during road trips, which creates a fun and joyful atmosphere.

× Yes, I would really enjoy singing because it helps to make makes me to express my feelings clearly.

✓ Yes, I would really enjoy singing because it helps me to express my feelings clearly.

The phrase 'helps to make makes me to express' is incorrect. The correct form is 'helps me to express' because 'help' is followed by the base verb or 'to' plus base verb without 'make'. The extra 'make' and 'to' are unnecessary and grammatically wrong.

× After a stressful day, I would feel better uh, if I would sing a song.

✓ After a stressful day, I would feel better if I sang a song.

In conditional sentences expressing hypothetical situations, the past tense is used after 'if' with 'would' in the main clause. Using 'would' in both clauses is incorrect. Hence, 'if I would sing' should be 'if I sang'.

× Yes, I've learned how to sing a song. Uh, whenever I, when I was in my school, I used to sing a song with one of my teacher.

✓ Yes, I've learned how to sing a song. Uh, when I was in school, I used to sing songs with one of my teachers.

The phrase 'when I was in my school' is unnatural; 'in school' is the correct expression. Also, 'a song' should be plural 'songs' when referring to habitual action. 'One of my teacher' should be 'one of my teachers' to agree in number.

× Singing for them feel makes me uh special because you are supportive and appreciative my efforts, which motivates me to perform better.

✓ Singing for them feels special because they are supportive and appreciative of my efforts, which motivates me to perform better.

The verb 'feel' should be 'feels' to agree with singular subject 'Singing'. 'You are' should be 'they are' to refer to 'them'. Also, 'appreciative my efforts' needs the preposition 'of' to be correct.

× Singing can bring happiness to people because there is a lot of enjoyment and they use it to make a group and sing a songs while they are on a road trips.

✓ Singing can bring happiness to people because there is a lot of enjoyment and they use it to form a group and sing songs while they are on road trips.

'Sing a songs' is incorrect; it should be 'sing songs' without 'a'. 'Make a group' is better expressed as 'form a group'. 'On a road trips' is incorrect; 'road trips' is plural and should not have 'a'.