Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and grammatical errors. Use clear topic sentences and link your ideas smoothly. For example, instead of repeating 'I love to sing', focus on why you enjoy singing and what kind of songs you prefer.

Example: Yes, I enjoy singing very much, especially Hindi romantic songs. I've been learning to sing since childhood, and it has become a cherished hobby of mine.

Suggestion: Improve your answer by correcting grammar and avoiding repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific details about your learning experience.

Example: Yes, I have been learning to sing since I was a child. My singing teachers have helped me improve my skills, and I also enjoy playing the piano and harmonium. Singing is truly my passion.

Suggestion: Your answer is good but can be improved by using more natural expressions and linking ideas smoothly. Also, avoid minor grammatical errors and be more specific about the song or occasion.

Example: I would love to sing for my husband because he has always been very supportive. For special occasions like our birthdays and anniversaries, he gives me thoughtful gifts, so singing a beautiful song for him would be my way of showing appreciation.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and logically, using linking words and specific examples to explain how singing affects people's emotions.

Example: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because music has the power to lift people's spirits. For example, when someone feels sad, listening to or singing a cheerful song can improve their mood significantly.

× Well I love to sing songs based on Hindi and romantic songs are the one that I like more to sing.

✓ Well I love to sing songs based on Hindi and romantic songs are the ones that I like to sing more.

The phrase 'are the one' is incorrect because 'songs' is plural, so it should be 'are the ones'. Also, 'like more to sing' is awkward; the correct order is 'like to sing more'. This corrects plural agreement and word order.

× I have been learning sing singing since my childhood and this becomes my hobby and I love to sing.

✓ I have been learning singing since my childhood and this has become my hobby and I love to sing.

The phrase 'learning sing singing' is incorrect; 'learning singing' is correct because 'singing' is the gerund form used after 'learning'. Also, 'this becomes my hobby' should be 'this has become my hobby' to indicate a change over time.

× I have my singing gurus that that teaches me how to sing properly.

✓ I have my singing gurus who teach me how to sing properly.

The relative pronoun 'that' is less appropriate for people; 'who' should be used. Also, 'that teaches' is singular, but 'gurus' is plural, so the verb should be 'teach' to agree with the plural subject.

× I have my singing gurus that that teaches me how to sing properly.

✓ I have my singing gurus who teach me how to sing properly.

The subject 'gurus' is plural, so the verb should be plural 'teach' instead of singular 'teaches' to maintain subject-verb agreement.

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Whom do you want to sing for?

The object of the verb 'want to sing for' should be 'whom' as it is the object pronoun, not 'who' which is a subject pronoun.

× He always gifted me expensive clothes and rings on my special occasions like birthday and wedding anniversaries.

✓ He always gifts me expensive clothes and rings on my special occasions like birthdays and wedding anniversaries.

The adverb 'always' with a habitual action requires the present simple tense 'gifts' instead of past tense 'gifted'. Also, 'birthday' should be plural 'birthdays' to match 'occasions'.

× He always gifted me expensive clothes and rings on my special occasions like birthday and wedding anniversaries.

✓ He always gifts me expensive clothes and rings on my special occasions like birthdays and wedding anniversaries.

The word 'birthday' should be plural 'birthdays' to agree with the plural 'occasions'.

× Yes, I feel that singing can change people's mood, as if people are sad when they listen to music, they feel good and if they dive deep into singing, they can they can be more. Srivastava.

✓ Yes, I feel that singing can change people's moods. If people are sad, when they listen to music, they feel better, and if they dive deep into singing, they can be happier.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'People's mood' should be plural 'moods'. The phrase 'they can they can be more. Srivastava.' is incomplete and unclear; it has been corrected to a coherent sentence expressing the intended meaning. Also, 'feel good' is better as 'feel better' in this context.