Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is good but try to make it more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "for me" twice and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, you can say "I love singing because it is my hobby and it gives me peaceful yet energetic vibes."

Example: I enjoy singing because it is my favorite hobby, and it helps me feel both peaceful and energized.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but a bit unclear and repetitive. Try to use linking words like "because" and "also" properly and avoid redundancy. For example, say "I haven't learned how to sing because I don't have the right environment or support."

Example: I have never learned to sing because I lack the proper environment and support to do so.

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit confusing and grammatically incorrect. Try to make your point clear and use correct tense and structure. For example, "I don't have a specific person to sing for; I want to sing for myself to improve and understand more."

Example: I don't have a particular person in mind to sing for; I want to sing for myself to grow and learn more.

Suggestion: Your answer has good ideas but some repetition and grammar mistakes. Use linking words and avoid repeating words like "healing". For example, "Yes, singing can bring happiness because it acts like a healing medicine and creates mesmerizing moments that calm our souls."

Example: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness as it serves as a healing medicine and creates beautiful moments that soothe our souls.

× I love singing very much because it is my hobby as well and singing gives me a kind of peaceful and energetic vibes for me.

✓ I love singing very much because it is my hobby as well and singing gives me a kind of peaceful and energetic vibe.

The word 'vibes' is plural, but the phrase 'a kind of' requires a singular noun, so 'vibes' should be changed to 'vibe'. This is a singular and plural issue (ID 1).

× Actually, I haven't learned how to sing and because I do not have that environment to learn also, and another reason is there's no good support for me.

✓ Actually, I haven't learned how to sing because I do not have the environment to learn, and another reason is there's no good support for me.

The sentence has unnecessary conjunction 'and' after 'haven't learned' and awkward phrasing. Removing 'and' and rephrasing improves clarity. Also, 'that environment' should be 'the environment' (article error). The main correction here is related to sentence structure (ID 26) and article error (ID 22).

× There is not a specific person to whom I wanted to sing for, but I wanted to sing for myself because I want to be and understand more. I thought I do.

✓ There is not a specific person to whom I want to sing, but I want to sing for myself because I want to be and understand more. I think I do.

The verb tense should match the present context of the question. 'Wanted' should be 'want' to indicate present desire. Also, 'to whom I wanted to sing for' is redundant; 'for' should be omitted after 'whom'. This is a future tense issue (ID 7) and sentence structure issue (ID 26).

× Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to the people because it is a kind of the healing, healing, also healing medicine. Also the practice of singing bring some mesmerizing moments that clams our souls.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it is a kind of healing, healing, also healing medicine. Also, the practice of singing brings some mesmerizing moments that calm our souls.

'The people' should be 'people' as a general statement (article error ID 22). 'Bring' should be 'brings' to agree with singular subject 'practice' (subject-verb agreement ID 27). 'Clams' is a typo for 'calms'. Also, 'a kind of the healing' should be 'a kind of healing' (article error ID 22).