Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific reasons using linking words. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors.

Example: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and refresh my mind. For example, I often sing my favourite songs from a special playlist that cheers me up.

Suggestion: Focus on clear sentence structure and correct grammar. Use linking words to explain your learning process logically and provide specific details.

Example: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons. Instead, I taught myself by watching TV shows and repeatedly listening to songs, which helped me observe the lyrics and improve my singing.

Suggestion: Make your answer clearer and more coherent by using proper linking words and correct grammar. Be specific about the person and the song to enrich your response.

Example: I want to sing a special song for a close friend who is currently in the US. When she returns to India, I plan to sing that song on her birthday because it is meaningful to both of us.

Suggestion: Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect your thoughts and provide specific examples to support your opinion.

Example: Of course, singing can bring happiness. Whenever I feel stressed or depressed, I play my favourite songs from my playlist and start singing along, which instantly lifts my mood.

× Yes, I do like singing while I'm singing a song, it gives some relaxation and refreshment to my mind and keep me happy.

✓ Yes, I do like singing; while I'm singing a song, it gives some relaxation and refreshment to my mind and keeps me happy.

The verb 'keep' should be in the third person singular form 'keeps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, the sentence needed a semicolon or period to separate two independent clauses for clarity.

× I would like to sing my favorite song that I had on my list.

✓ I would like to sing my favorite song that I have on my list.

The present perfect 'have' is appropriate here to indicate possession of the list currently, instead of past tense 'had'.

× I'm having some separate list of songs I often listen that.

✓ I have a separate list of songs that I often listen to.

The phrase 'I'm having' is incorrect; 'I have' is used for possession. Also, 'listen that' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'listen to'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity.

× No, I didn't learn about sing how to sing.

✓ No, I didn't learn how to sing.

The phrase 'learn about sing how to sing' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'learn how to sing'. The past tense 'didn't learn' is correct here.

× I just learned by myself while watching TV, listening to songs and I repeatedly listen the song and while I'm hearing I just observe the slogan like that I would learn how to.

✓ I just learned by myself while watching TV, listening to songs, and I repeatedly listen to the song; while I'm hearing it, I just observe the lyrics like that I would learn how to sing.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to'. 'Slogan' is incorrect; 'lyrics' is appropriate for songs. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct verb forms.

× I would like to sing a song to 1 special person.

✓ I would like to sing a song to one special person.

The numeral '1' should be written as 'one' in formal writing.

× She's in US when she get back to India.

✓ She's in the US; when she gets back to India,

The country name 'US' requires the definite article 'the'. The verb 'get' should be 'gets' to agree with the third person singular subject 'she'. The sentence is split for clarity.

× I just plan to sing that song on her birthday that's make make her so special that one particular song that we both are like so much.

✓ I just plan to sing that song on her birthday; that will make her feel special. That one particular song is one that we both like very much.

The phrase 'that's make make' is incorrect; it should be 'that will make'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct tense usage.

× Of course, whenever we feel feel stress, depression, we just pick up my I just pick up my phone and play play my songs that I had in my playlist that all my favorite song while the song is running, I started singing with.

✓ Of course, whenever we feel stress or depression, I just pick up my phone and play the songs that I have in my playlist, all my favorite songs. While the song is playing, I start singing along.

Repeated words 'feel feel' and 'play play' are corrected. 'My I just pick up my phone' is corrected to 'I just pick up my phone'. 'That I had' is corrected to 'that I have' to indicate current possession. 'Started singing with' is corrected to 'start singing along' for proper expression.