Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by making it more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors. For example, instead of saying 'I am not trying to sing', say 'I don't like singing'. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I like singing, but I usually sing only when I am alone or with my family because I feel my voice is not very good to sing in front of others.

Suggestion: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions. Try to respond directly and clearly. Use correct verb forms and avoid awkward phrases. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Example: No, I have never learnt how to sing because I am more interested in listening to songs. However, if I ever get a chance, I would like to learn singing from a famous singer.

Suggestion: Your answer is quite long and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences shorter and clearer. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect ideas logically. Also, avoid redundancy and focus on the main point.

Example: I am not very interested in singing, but if I do, I would sing for my family and close friends because they are supportive and appreciate my efforts, which motivates me to improve.

Suggestion: Your answer conveys the idea but has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use correct verb forms and linking words to make your answer more natural and effective. Also, provide specific examples to support your opinion.

Example: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people. For example, when someone feels bored, they might start singing different types of songs like folk or pop music, which can improve their mood.

× Yes, I like singing, but I am not trying to sing in front of other people because my voice is very terrible.

✓ Yes, I like singing, but I do not try to sing in front of other people because my voice is very terrible.

The phrase 'I am not trying to sing' incorrectly uses the present continuous tense to express a habitual action. The correct form is the simple present 'I do not try' to indicate a general habit or preference.

× That's why I prefer to sing when I am alone or it's sometime in front of my family.

✓ That's why I prefer to sing when I am alone or sometimes in front of my family.

The word 'sometime' is an adverb meaning 'at some unspecified time' and is incorrect here. The correct adverb is 'sometimes', meaning 'occasionally', which fits the context.

× No, I am not interested or to learn about singing because I only interested in listen song.

✓ No, I am not interested in learning about singing because I am only interested in listening to songs.

The phrase 'interested or to learn' is incorrect; 'interested in' should be followed by a gerund ('learning'). Also, 'interested in listen song' should be 'interested in listening to songs' to use the correct gerund form and preposition.

× Well if I get a chance in my life to learn a song from any celebrity, it means from any famous singer.

✓ Well, if I get a chance in my life to learn a song from any celebrity, that means from any famous singer.

The phrase 'it means' is better replaced with 'that means' to refer back to the previous clause clearly. Also, a comma after 'Well' improves sentence clarity.

× Well, I am not interested in singing but if I get a chance and if I complained in this situation to impress my family or my close friends than I singing for them feel special because they are supportive and I appreciate my efforts which motivates me to perform better.

✓ Well, I am not interested in singing, but if I get a chance and if I complain in this situation to impress my family or my close friends, then I sing for them to make them feel special because they are supportive and I appreciate their efforts which motivate me to perform better.

The sentence has multiple errors: 'complained' should be 'complain' to match the present tense; 'than' should be 'then' as a conjunction; 'I singing' should be 'I sing'; 'feel special' needs 'to make them feel special' for clarity; 'my efforts' should be 'their efforts' to refer to family and friends; 'motivates' should be 'motivate' to agree with plural 'efforts'. Commas are added for clarity.

× Yeah, so singing is that which make people more happy.

✓ Yeah, so singing is what makes people happier.

The phrase 'is that which make' is awkward and incorrect; 'is what makes' is the correct relative clause. Also, 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'singing'. 'More happy' is better expressed as the comparative 'happier'.

× It means if someone bored then they start singing because there are different types of songs like folk, pop music, they change people's mood.

✓ It means if someone is bored, then they start singing because there are different types of songs like folk and pop music; they change people's moods.

The sentence lacks the verb 'is' after 'someone' to form 'someone is bored'. Also, 'folk, pop music' should be connected with 'and' for clarity. 'People's mood' should be plural 'people's moods' as different songs affect moods in general.