Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "when I was a children" (phải là "when I was a child") và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, nên dùng từ vựng phù hợp và tránh lặp từ như "really like to sing" nhiều lần.

Example: Yes, I enjoy singing very much because when I was a child, my mother took me to a concert at the stadium. Since then, I have loved singing, especially K-pop songs. Singing makes me feel over the moon and helps me reduce stress.

Suggestion: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ cho chính xác hơn, ví dụ "I have ever learned" nên là "I have learned" hoặc "I have taken singing lessons". Câu trả lời cũng nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh dùng những cụm từ không phù hợp như "more convenient" trong ngữ cảnh này.

Example: Yes, I have learned how to sing. When I was in primary school, the school offered many singing lessons. I really enjoyed singing with my teacher because it helped me improve my skills.

Suggestion: Bạn nên sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Ví dụ, "I always dreamed to stand in the performance through singing with her" nên là "I have always dreamed of performing on stage with her". Ngoài ra, hãy dùng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: The person I want to sing for is Jennie from Blackpink because I am a big fan of hers. I have always dreamed of performing on stage with her since her music helps me reduce stress.

Suggestion: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Ví dụ, "I always singing" nên là "I always sing" và "to blow up something" không phù hợp trong ngữ cảnh này. Hãy dùng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và cụ thể hơn.

Example: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it helps reduce stress and makes them feel joyful. For example, when I feel sad, I always sing with my friends to lift my mood and feel more relaxed.

× when I was a children my mother took me to the stadium to watch concert

✓ when I was a child my mother took me to the stadium to watch a concert

The word 'children' is plural, but the sentence refers to a singular subject 'I', so 'child' should be used. Also, 'concert' is a countable noun and needs an article 'a' before it.

× when I singing I feel very over the moon

✓ when I sing I feel very over the moon

After 'when', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. 'When I sing' is correct.

× I have ever learned how to sing

✓ I have learned how to sing

'Have ever learned' is incorrect; 'ever' is used in questions or negatives. The correct form is 'I have learned'.

× the school offers numerous singing lessons than in my lessons

✓ the school offers numerous singing lessons during my lessons

'Than' is used for comparisons, but here the intended meaning is 'during' or 'in the time of', so 'during' is correct.

× this lesson is make me more convenient

✓ this lesson makes me more confident

The verb phrase is incorrect; 'is make' should be 'makes'. Also, 'convenient' is not appropriate here; 'confident' fits better in context.

× she is made me reduce the stress

✓ she helps me reduce the stress

'She is made me' is incorrect; the correct structure is 'she helps me' to express assistance.

× singing can offer the happiness to people

✓ singing can offer happiness to people

'Happiness' is an uncountable noun and does not need the definite article 'the' here.

× I always singing with my friend to blow up something

✓ I always sing with my friend to blow off steam

'Always' should be followed by the base verb 'sing', not the '-ing' form. Also, 'blow up something' is incorrect; the idiom is 'blow off steam' meaning to release stress.