Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Ваша відповідь містить граматичні помилки та не є природною. Слід уникати зайвих деталей, які не відповідають на питання безпосередньо, і використовувати правильні форми дієслів.

Example: No, I don't like singing because I'm not confident in my singing abilities. Therefore, I usually avoid music lessons and karaoke with my friends.

Suggestion: Відповідь має граматичні помилки і не дуже чітка. Варто використовувати правильні часи та форми дієслів, а також додати трохи більше деталей для кращого розуміння.

Example: Yes, I attended music school when I was seven, but the teachers were rude, so I decided to leave.

Suggestion: Ваша відповідь містить помилки у словах і граматиці, а також не зовсім відповідає на питання. Слід чітко сформулювати думку і використовувати правильні слова.

Example: I want to sing for a large audience because it can help me earn money and become popular.

Suggestion: Ваша відповідь не є логічною і містить незрозумілі фрази. Слід відповідати більш конкретно, використовуючи правильну граматику і пов'язуючи думки логічно.

Example: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness. For example, when I sing in the shower, my mood improves and I feel more relaxed.

× I doesn't like singing because I'm not really sure in my singing abilities.

✓ I don't like singing because I'm not really sure about my singing abilities.

The subject 'I' requires the auxiliary verb 'do' in negative sentences, not 'does'. 'Doesn't' is used with third person singular subjects. Also, the preposition 'in' is incorrect here; 'about' should be used to express uncertainty regarding abilities.

× I doesn't like singing because I'm not really sure in my singing abilities.

✓ I don't like singing because I'm not really sure about my singing abilities.

The phrase 'sure in' is incorrect; the correct preposition to use with 'sure' when expressing confidence or uncertainty is 'about'.

× I prefer to avoid the music lessons at school or karaoke with my friends.

✓ I prefer to avoid music lessons at school or karaoke with my friends.

The definite article 'the' is unnecessary before 'music lessons' when speaking generally. Also, the sentence is acceptable but removing 'the' makes it more natural.

× When I was 7 years I went to music school but teachers was so rude so I decided to left it.

✓ When I was 7 years old, I went to music school but the teachers were so rude that I decided to leave it.

The phrase '7 years' should be '7 years old' to indicate age. 'Teachers' is plural, so the verb should be 'were' not 'was'. 'Left' is the past tense, but after 'decided to' the base form 'leave' should be used.

× When I was 7 years I went to music school but teachers was so rude so I decided to left it.

✓ When I was 7 years old, I went to music school but the teachers were so rude that I decided to leave it.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'teachers' to specify which teachers are being referred to.

× When I was 7 years I went to music school but teachers was so rude so I decided to left it.

✓ When I was 7 years old, I went to music school but the teachers were so rude that I decided to leave it.

After 'decided to', the verb should be in base form 'leave', not past tense 'left'.

× I think seeing is a good way to earn money and to become popular.

✓ I think singing is a good way to earn money and to become popular.

The word 'seeing' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'singing' which relates to the context of the conversation.

× Maybe I want to sing for a big auditor.

✓ Maybe I want to sing for a big audience.

The word 'auditor' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'audience'. Also, 'a big audience' is the correct phrase.

× That's really a good question. I admit it that when I singing in the shower my mood becomes better.

✓ That's really a good question. I admit that when I sing in the shower, my mood becomes better.

The phrase 'I admit it that' is incorrect; 'I admit that' is correct. Also, 'when I singing' should be 'when I sing' because after 'when' the verb should be in base form or present tense.

× That's really a good question. I admit it that when I singing in the shower my mood becomes better.

✓ That's really a good question. I admit that when I sing in the shower, my mood becomes better.

The verb after 'when' should be in present tense 'sing' not 'singing'.

× I usually don't see something special.

✓ I usually don't see anything special.

In negative sentences, 'anything' is used instead of 'something'.