Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer has some grammatical errors and unnatural phrasing. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. For example, instead of "I like people to see singing," say "I like watching people sing." Also, avoid redundancy like "to singing."

Example: I enjoy watching people sing, but I don't like singing myself because I think my voice is not very good.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but repetitive. Try to avoid repeating the same idea and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, use more natural expressions like "I haven't had the chance to learn singing."

Example: No, I haven't had the chance to learn how to sing because I was more interested in dancing.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using more formal language and linking words. For example, replace "wanna" with "want to" and add a linking phrase to explain your reason.

Example: I would like to sing for my mother because she is a great woman, and through singing, I want to express my feelings and love for her.

Suggestion: Your answer has good ideas but needs better structure and vocabulary. Avoid repeating "people" and use linking words like "because" more effectively. Also, try to use more precise words like "express" instead of "our expression."

Example: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness and quickly relax people because it is a way to express both happiness and sadness.

× I like people to see singing, but I actually don't like to singing because my voice is not so much good for singing.

✓ I like people to see singing, but I actually don't like singing because my voice is not very good for singing.

The phrase 'don't like to singing' is incorrect because after 'like' when expressing dislike, the verb should be in the gerund form without 'to'. So, 'don't like singing' is correct. Also, 'not so much good' is ungrammatical; it should be 'not very good' to express degree properly.

× No, I never learned how to sing.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing.

Since the question is about experience up to now, the present perfect tense 'have never learned' is more appropriate than simple past 'never learned' to indicate an action that has not happened at any time until now.

× I didn't have the opportunity to learn how to sing.

✓ I haven't had the opportunity to learn how to sing.

Similar to the previous sentence, the present perfect 'haven't had' is better to express that up to now, the opportunity has not occurred, rather than a specific past time.

× That's why I didn't learn about singing.

✓ That's why I haven't learned about singing.

Again, present perfect 'haven't learned' is more suitable to indicate the lack of learning up to the present moment.

× I was more about a dance person.

✓ I was more of a dance person.

The phrase 'more about a dance person' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'more of a dance person' to indicate preference or identity.

× I would sing for my mother because she is a great woman and I wanna express my feelings and my love for her by singing.

✓ I would sing for my mother because she is a great woman and I want to express my feelings and my love for her by singing.

The informal contraction 'wanna' should be replaced with the correct modal verb phrase 'want to' in formal or semi-formal speech.