Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 你嘅答案有啲唔自然同埋語法錯誤，例如「I decided」用得唔啱，應該直接講你嘅感受同理由。另外，句子結構唔夠清晰，建議用一個主題句，再用一兩句支持細節，並且避免重複同冗長。

Example: I don't really like singing because I'm not confident in my singing skills. Also, I find it challenging to perform in front of many people, which makes me feel nervous.

Suggestion: 你嘅答案有語法錯誤，例如「couriers」應該係「courses」。句子可以更自然同流暢，建議用一個完整嘅主題句，再加一兩句具體細節，例如學咗幾耐或者學咗啲咩。

Example: Yes, I have. I attended singing courses when I was in primary school, which helped me learn basic techniques and improve my voice.

Suggestion: 你嘅答案有語法錯誤，例如「think for myself」應該係「sing for myself」。句子結構唔清晰，建議直接回答問題，然後用一兩句解釋原因，令答案更完整同自然。

Example: I usually sing just for myself because I'm not very confident in my singing ability. Singing helps me relax and enjoy my free time.

Suggestion: 你嘅答案有啲語法同用詞錯誤，例如「from my opinions」應該係「in my opinion」，「after a long days」應該係「after a long day」。建議用更自然嘅表達，並且用連接詞令句子更流暢。

Example: Yes, in my opinion, singing helps people unwind after a long day. It can lift their mood and create a positive mindset, making them feel happier.

× Actually, I decided because I'm not a good singer and I think singing is challenging because you need to sing in front of so much people.

✓ Actually, I decided not to because I'm not a good singer and I think singing is challenging because you need to sing in front of so many people.

'Decided' is past tense and needs an object or complement; 'decided because' is incorrect. Also, 'so much people' is incorrect; 'people' is countable, so 'so many people' is correct. 建議使用 'decided not to' 來完整表達決定不做某事，並用 'so many people' 來形容可數名詞 'people' 的數量。

× Yes I have. I have attended the couriers when I was studying in the primary school.

✓ Yes, I have. I attended courses when I was studying in primary school.

'Have attended' is present perfect, but the time 'when I was studying' indicates a finished past action, so simple past 'attended' is appropriate. Also, 'couriers' is a wrong word; the correct word is 'courses'. 'The primary school' should be 'primary school' without 'the'. 建議使用過去式 'attended' 來配合明確的過去時間，並更正拼寫錯誤及冠詞使用。

× Actually, I only want to think for myself because I'm not a good singer and I'm not good at singing.

✓ Actually, I only want to think for myself because I'm not a good singer and I'm not good at singing.

The sentence is grammatically correct but semantically odd; 'think for myself' is unusual in this context. Possibly the student meant 'sing for myself'. However, since the instruction is to correct only grammar mistakes, no correction is made here. 建議注意語意表達，但此處無明顯文法錯誤。

× Yes, from my opinions, it is for people to unwind after a long days.

✓ Yes, in my opinion, it is for people to unwind after a long day.

'Opinions' should be singular 'opinion' when expressing a personal view. 'From my opinions' is incorrect; 'in my opinion' is the correct phrase. 'A long days' mixes singular article 'a' with plural noun 'days'; it should be 'a long day'. 建議使用固定片語 'in my opinion' 並保持單複數一致。

× I think the singing is very perfect for them and it helps people to create a positive mindset.

✓ I think singing is perfect for them and it helps people to create a positive mindset.

'Very perfect' is incorrect because 'perfect' is an absolute adjective and cannot be modified by 'very'. Also, 'the singing' is unnecessary; 'singing' as a general activity does not need 'the'. 建議避免使用 'very perfect'，直接用 'perfect' 即可，並省略不必要的定冠詞。