Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý tưởng không được truyền đạt tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó giải thích lý do một cách mạch lạc và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn.

Example: I don't particularly enjoy singing because I don't have a good voice or breath control. However, I sometimes sing to help myself relax after a long day.

Suggestion: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó giải thích chi tiết hơn về trải nghiệm học hát của bạn, sử dụng các liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc.

Example: Yes, I have tried to learn singing by myself using YouTube tutorials. However, I found it ineffective, so I stopped following those lessons.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý tưởng khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu chủ đề và các chi tiết cụ thể, đồng thời dùng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

Example: I would like to sing for my parents on special occasions such as Mother's Day and Father's Day to show my love and respect. I also enjoy singing at school events like the opening ceremony or New Year's celebrations.

Suggestion: Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Hãy giải thích rõ hơn về lợi ích của việc hát và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp với ngữ cảnh.

Example: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it helps people reduce stress. Enjoying melodies and positive lyrics can improve our mood and make us feel less tired.

× For me singing is not my favorite hobbies because the thing that I don't have any talent is it subject like I don't have a beautiful voice and cannot control my breath even besides I'm sometimes singing to feel relaxed.

✓ For me, singing is not my favorite hobby because I don't have any talent in this subject; I don't have a beautiful voice and cannot control my breath. However, sometimes I sing to feel relaxed.

The word 'hobbies' is plural but should be singular 'hobby' to agree with 'my favorite'. Also, the sentence structure is confusing and needs punctuation and conjunctions to clarify meaning.

× Yes, of course sometimes try to learn to sing by myself by searching on the youtube.com, but it seems that it's not effective and helpful or so I stopped learning from that website.

✓ Yes, of course, I sometimes try to learn to sing by myself by searching on YouTube, but it seems that it's not effective or helpful, so I stopped learning from that website.

The subject 'I' is missing before 'sometimes try'. Also, 'youtube.com' should be 'YouTube' as a proper noun. The conjunction 'or so' is incorrect and should be 'so'.

× A special occasion like Mother's Day and Father's Day, I will sing from my mommy, my dad to express my respect and my love in other ceremony like school opening ceremony, everything too happy for the New Year's school.

✓ On special occasions like Mother's Day and Father's Day, I will sing for my mom and dad to express my respect and love. In other ceremonies like the school opening ceremony or New Year's celebration, I also sing happily.

The preposition 'from' is incorrect; it should be 'for' when indicating the recipient of singing. Also, 'mommy' is informal; 'mom' is better. The sentence structure and prepositions for occasions need correction.

× Yes, of course, like singing is effective way for people to reduce stress, Singing is like we've enjoyed the melodies. Remember the positive lyrics that can help us prevent stress and exhausted.

✓ Yes, of course, singing is an effective way for people to reduce stress. Singing is like enjoying melodies. Remember, positive lyrics can help us prevent stress and exhaustion.

'Effective way' needs the article 'an'. 'Melodies' is plural and should not be preceded by 'the' here. 'Exhausted' is an adjective; the noun 'exhaustion' is correct in this context.