Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more structured and clear. Start with a direct response, then explain why you like singing with specific reasons. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases like 'what about what to do about next'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I like singing very much. I often sing while doing daily activities like bathing or cooking because it helps me relax and think clearly. Moreover, singing inspires me and helps me come up with new ideas.

Suggestion: Focus on giving a clear and direct answer first, then add details. Use correct tense and grammar, for example, 'I studied' instead of 'I'm study'. Also, explain your experience more specifically and use linking words to connect ideas.

Example: Yes, I have learnt how to sing. When I was a child, my class teacher taught me how to sing solo songs. Although it was difficult at first, I enjoyed learning and improving my skills.

Suggestion: Make your answer clearer and more relevant to the question. Directly say who you want to sing for and why. Use correct grammar and avoid vague phrases. Use linking words to explain your reasons logically.

Example: I want to sing for my mother because she enjoys listening to my singing. She has always supported me and made many sacrifices, so singing for her is my way of showing gratitude.

Suggestion: Provide a clear opinion first, then support it with specific reasons. Use correct grammar and avoid awkward phrases like 'everyone should come and clear mind'. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Example: Definitely, I believe singing brings happiness to people. Listening to and singing songs can lift our mood and help us relax. Therefore, singing is a great way to clear the mind and feel joyful.

× Almost every day I'm singing while I'm bathing, while I'm cooking, while I'm studying because it makes my mind very calm and clear what about what to do about next.

✓ Almost every day I sing while I'm bathing, cooking, or studying because it makes my mind very calm and clear about what to do next.

The use of 'I'm singing' suggests a continuous action, but here the student means a habitual action, so simple present 'I sing' is correct. Also, 'while I'm cooking' is acceptable, but to avoid repetition, 'cooking' alone suffices. The phrase 'what about what to do about next' is unclear and corrected to 'about what to do next' for clarity.

× And I have flow of ideas to doing this singing songs very well.

✓ And I have a flow of ideas to do this singing very well.

The phrase 'to doing' is incorrect; after 'to' (a preposition), the base form or gerund can be used depending on context. Here, 'to do' is correct. Also, 'singing songs' is redundant; 'singing' alone suffices.

× It's very difficult to learn how to sing, but actually when I'm study at at my childhood, my class teacher teach how to solo sing a song even though it's very tough for me.

✓ It's very difficult to learn how to sing, but actually when I was studying in my childhood, my class teacher taught me how to solo sing a song even though it was very tough for me.

The sentence requires past tense forms 'was studying' and 'taught' to indicate past actions. 'Teach' should be 'taught' and 'I'm study' is incorrect; 'I was studying' is correct. Also, 'at at' is a typo and corrected to 'in'. 'Solo sing a song' is acceptable but could be 'sing a solo' for naturalness.

× I like to sing this song because of my mother. Furthermore, she likes a lot to see me, that's why she have made me a lot of things and enjoy my singing all.

✓ I like to sing this song because of my mother. Furthermore, she likes a lot to see me; that's why she has made me a lot of things and enjoys my singing.

'She have' should be 'she has' for singular subject. 'Enjoy' should be 'enjoys' to agree with singular subject 'she'. 'Enjoy my singing all' is unclear and corrected to 'enjoys my singing'.

× Definitely, I strongly agree this one because most of the people being happy with hearing the song and singing the song.

✓ Definitely, I strongly agree with this because most people are happy when hearing and singing songs.

'Agree' requires 'with' to indicate agreement. 'Being happy' is incorrect here; 'are happy' is correct. 'Most of the people' is better as 'most people'. 'Hearing the song and singing the song' is better as 'hearing and singing songs' for naturalness.

× In that case everyone should come and clear mind about hearing this song.

✓ In that case, everyone should come and clear their minds by listening to this song.

The phrase 'clear mind about hearing this song' is ungrammatical. 'Clear their minds' is correct, and 'by listening to this song' is a better expression than 'about hearing this song'. Also, a comma after 'In that case' improves sentence clarity.