Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如"he helps me"应为"it helps me"，且句子结构不够自然。建议注意主谓一致，使用正确的代词，并简洁表达观点。

Example: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relieve stress and improves my mood after a long day. For example, when I hear my favorite song, I feel more relaxed.

Suggestion: 回答中有重复词汇"since since"，且表达不够流畅。建议避免重复，使用更自然的表达方式，并注意时态和语法的正确性。

Example: No, I have never learned to sing professionally. From elementary school to university, there were no singing classes available.

Suggestion: 回答中"a lot of audience are listening to my singing in"表达不完整且语法错误。建议完善句子结构，使用正确的介词和复数形式，使表达更自然。

Example: Well, that's an interesting question. I probably want to sing just for myself. Sometimes I imagine I'm on stage with a large audience listening to my singing.

Suggestion: 回答中多处拼写错误，如"seeing"应为"singing"，且句子结构混乱。建议注意拼写，使用完整且连贯的句子表达观点。

Example: Absolutely, singing can convey happy messages to people. When people are under stress, singing often helps them feel better.

× Yes, I really enjoy singing because he helps me to release my stress and give me a good mood after a long day.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me to release my stress and gives me a good mood after a long day.

这里的代词“he”指代不明确，应该用“it”来指代“singing”。此外，谓语动词需要与主语一致，使用第三人称单数形式“gives”。

× After a busy day, for instance, when I seen my favorite song, I feel more relaxed.

✓ After a busy day, for instance, when I see my favorite song, I feel more relaxed.

“seen”是过去分词，句中应使用一般现在时“see”，因为描述的是习惯性动作。

× No, I haven't learned how to sing by a professional way since since I was born.

✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing in a professional way since I was born.

“since since”重复，应去掉一个“since”。此外，介词“by”用错，正确用法是“in a professional way”。

× Even in my elementary school to the university, there's not a singing class.

✓ Even from my elementary school to the university, there isn't a singing class.

“there's”是“there is”的缩写，后接单数名词，但“singing class”前加否定时应使用“there isn't”。另外，时间范围表达应使用“from... to...”。

× Sometimes I imagine I'm on stage and a lot of audience are listening to my singing in.

✓ Sometimes I imagine I'm on stage and a lot of audience are listening to my singing.

“listening to”后不需要介词“in”，多余的介词应删除。

× Absolutely, seeing can convey some happy messages to people.

✓ Absolutely, singing can convey some happy messages to people.

“seeing”应为“singing”，原句中拼写错误导致词义错误。

× So when people under stress they are tend to see.

✓ So when people are under stress, they tend to sing.

“people under stress”缺少动词“are”，且“tend to see”应为“tend to sing”，动词错误。