Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Jawaban Anda agak panjang dan berulang, serta kurang terstruktur dengan baik. Cobalah untuk memberikan jawaban yang lebih singkat dan langsung ke inti, serta hindari pengulangan kata seperti 'I think'. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih alami dan efektif.

Example: Yes, I enjoy singing occasionally, especially when I'm with my friends or family, but I don't consider it a hobby because I'm not very confident in my singing skills.

Suggestion: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan terdapat kesalahan tata bahasa. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lebih sederhana dan terstruktur dengan baik, serta gunakan kata penghubung untuk menjelaskan hubungan antar ide.

Example: My mom never taught me to sing, but she encouraged me to learn the piano when I was young. That's why I can play the piano well now.

Suggestion: Jawaban Anda agak membingungkan dan ada kesalahan kata seperti 'hurt my hair'. Cobalah untuk menggunakan kalimat yang lebih jelas dan tepat, serta hindari kesalahan kosakata.

Example: Because I'm not confident in my singing, I would prefer to sing only for my boyfriend, who is supportive and understanding.

Suggestion: Jawaban Anda cukup baik, tetapi ada pengulangan kata 'I think' dan kalimat yang agak panjang. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lebih ringkas dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk memperjelas alasan Anda.

Example: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because it allows people to express their emotions and relieve stress by focusing on the music.

× Yes, I do like singing in karaoke or in the car when with my friends or my families, but I think singing is not one of my hobbies because I think because many of my friends and families also say that I'm not good at singing.

✓ Yes, I do like singing in karaoke or in the car when with my friends or my family, but I think singing is not one of my hobbies because many of my friends and family also say that I'm not good at singing.

The word 'families' is incorrect here because it refers to multiple family units, but the speaker likely means their own family as a single unit. The correct singular collective noun is 'family'. Similarly, 'friends' is plural and correct, but 'families' should be singular 'family' to match the intended meaning.

× My mom never taught me how to sing but my but she in the past she makes me to learn how to play the piano.

✓ My mom never taught me how to sing but she, in the past, made me learn how to play the piano.

The verb 'makes' is in the present tense, but the sentence refers to a past event, so it should be 'made'. Also, 'to learn' after 'made me' is incorrect; the correct form is the bare infinitive 'learn'. The phrase 'but my but she' is redundant and should be simplified to 'but she'.

× Since I'm not really good at singing and I'm kind of embarrassed to let people hurt my hair, my voice, so I think my boyfriend will be one of the people that I am more confident for him to hear the skill of my singing.

✓ Since I'm not really good at singing and I'm kind of embarrassed to let people hear my voice, so I think my boyfriend will be one of the people I am more confident to let hear my singing skills.

The phrase 'hurt my hair, my voice' is incorrect and unclear; likely the intended meaning is 'hear my voice'. Also, 'confident for him to hear' is incorrect; the correct structure is 'confident to let him hear' or 'confident to let hear'. The sentence structure is adjusted for clarity and correct preposition use.

× Yes, I think so, because I think singing is like an expression to relieve stress or it's just like an expression how you can let go of your feelings and just sing without thinking anything else.

✓ Yes, I think so, because singing is like an expression to relieve stress or a way to let go of your feelings and just sing without thinking about anything else.

The phrase 'it's just like an expression how you can let go' is awkward and incorrect. It should be rephrased to 'a way to let go' for clarity and grammatical correctness. Also, 'thinking anything else' should be 'thinking about anything else' to use the correct preposition.