Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat natural but has some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to be more concise and clear, for example, avoid filler words like 'uh' and ensure subject-verb agreement. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details using linking words.

Example: Yes, I enjoy singing, especially when I am alone. Singing helps me improve my voice and boosts my confidence because it requires practice and skill.

Suggestion: Your answer lacks clarity and has some grammatical mistakes. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Also, be specific about what you learnt and how it helped you. Avoid filler words and keep sentences concise.

Example: Yes, I have learnt singing by researching online and using various apps that provide musical instruments and platforms to practice. This experience motivates me to become a lyricist in the future.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and somewhat confusing. Try to organise your ideas logically and use appropriate linking words. Be specific about your audience and the themes of your songs. Avoid vague phrases and incomplete sentences.

Example: I want to sing for myself, expressing my personal experiences. Additionally, I would like to sing motivational songs about social issues, such as education and government matters, to inspire others.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and be more precise in your vocabulary. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas unnecessarily.

Example: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness to people. Many face stress and anxiety, but listening to music can comfort and motivate them to work harder in life. Therefore, singing plays an important role in improving people's mood.

× It also help to develop our voice very fluent and uh, also develop our confidence because singing is not that much easy.

✓ It also helps to develop our voice very fluently and also develops our confidence because singing is not that easy.

The verb 'help' should be in third person singular form 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'It'. 'Fluent' is an adjective, but here an adverb 'fluently' is needed to modify the verb 'develop'. Also, 'develop' should be 'develops' to agree with the singular subject 'It'. 'Not that much easy' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'not that easy'.

× Yes, I did a lot of research on Internet and I got a lot of apps which provide me, uh, instruments and on, on which platforms I can easily sing the songs.

✓ Yes, I did a lot of research on the Internet and I got a lot of apps which provide me instruments and platforms on which I can easily sing songs.

The phrase 'on Internet' should be 'on the Internet' because 'Internet' is a unique noun requiring the definite article. The sentence is in past tense, so 'got' is correct. 'Provide me, uh, instruments and on, on which platforms' is awkward; it should be 'provide me instruments and platforms on which'. Also, 'the songs' should be 'songs' as it refers to songs in general.

× And I think it would be a great opportunity for me to sing songs and I want to become a lyricist in the future.

✓ And I think it would be a great opportunity for me to sing songs, and I want to become a lyricist in the future.

A comma is needed before 'and' to separate two independent clauses. The prepositions used are correct here.

× Firstly, I want to sing for my own life, for my previous experiences and I would like to sing on the natural things like on the schools, on the government, on the like, things happening around us.

✓ Firstly, I want to sing about my own life, about my previous experiences, and I would like to sing about natural things like schools, the government, and things happening around us.

The preposition 'for' is incorrect when referring to topics; 'about' is appropriate. Also, 'sing on the natural things' is incorrect; it should be 'sing about natural things'. The repeated 'on the' before 'schools' and 'government' is unnecessary. 'On the like' is incorrect and should be removed or replaced with 'and'.

× And mostly I would like to sing song motivational.

✓ And mostly I would like to sing motivational songs.

The word order is incorrect. 'Motivational' is an adjective describing 'songs', so it should precede the noun. Also, 'song' should be plural 'songs' to match the context.

× But after listening music they feel very comfortable.

✓ But after listening to music, they feel very comfortable.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' when followed by an object. Also, a comma after the introductory phrase improves clarity.

× Some music help them to motivate and do hard work in their further life.

✓ Some music helps them to stay motivated and work hard in their future life.

'Music' is singular and requires the verb 'helps'. 'Motivate' should be 'stay motivated' to fit the context. 'Do hard work' is better expressed as 'work hard'. 'Further life' is incorrect; 'future life' is appropriate.

× So I think it is very important to singing a song.

✓ So I think it is very important to sing a song.

After 'important to', the base form of the verb 'sing' should be used, not the gerund 'singing'.