Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by making it more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like repeating 'singing' multiple times. Also, use correct tense and grammar, for example, 'I have liked singing since my childhood' and 'I recently participated in a music competition and got second place.'

Example: Yes, I have liked singing since my childhood as it is my favourite hobby. Recently, I participated in a music competition and secured second place.

Suggestion: Your answer needs better grammar and clarity. Use past tense correctly, for example, 'I learnt how to sing during my school days.' Also, avoid awkward phrasing like 'he tell about to sing.' Instead, say 'he taught me singing techniques and music theory, which was very helpful.'

Example: Yes, I learnt how to sing during my school days. We had a great music teacher who taught me singing techniques and music theory, which was very helpful.

Suggestion: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and unclear parts. Use correct pronouns, for example, 'they' instead of 'he' for parents. Also, clarify your ideas by separating them into two sentences. For example, 'I want to sing for my parents because they have given me many opportunities. I also prefer singing Punjabi songs because I enjoy their lyrics.'

Example: I want to sing for my parents because they have given me many opportunities in life. I also prefer singing Punjabi songs because I enjoy their meaningful lyrics.

Suggestion: Your answer is repetitive and has grammar errors. Avoid repeating 'everyone' and use singular/plural forms correctly. For example, say 'I believe singing brings happiness because it provides relaxation and refreshes the mind.' Also, keep sentences clear and concise.

Example: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness to people because it provides relaxation and refreshes the mind.

× From my childhood I like singing and recently I participate in music competition and I get second position.

✓ Since my childhood, I have liked singing and recently I participated in a music competition and got second position.

The sentence incorrectly uses present tense 'like' and 'participate' for past events. 'Since my childhood' requires present perfect 'have liked' to indicate an action continuing from past to present. 'Recently' indicates past action, so 'participated' and 'got' in past tense are appropriate.

× Yes, I learn about how to sing in my school time.

✓ Yes, I learned how to sing during my school time.

The verb 'learn' should be in past tense 'learned' because the action happened in the past. Also, 'during my school time' is a better phrase than 'in my school time'.

× There was a great teacher of music he tell about to sing and some knowledge about singings to me which is very knowledgeable for me.

✓ There was a great music teacher who taught me how to sing and shared some knowledge about singing, which was very helpful for me.

The original sentence is a run-on and has incorrect verb forms. 'He tell' should be 'who taught'. 'About to sing' is incorrect; 'how to sing' is correct. 'Singings' is incorrect; 'singing' is the correct noun form. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.

× I want to send for my parents because he provided me a lot of opportunity in my life and I also prefer to sing Punjabi music because I like Punjabi lyrics music.

✓ I want to sing for my parents because they have provided me with a lot of opportunities in my life, and I also prefer to sing Punjabi music because I like Punjabi lyrics.

The pronoun 'he' is incorrect when referring to 'parents' which is plural; 'they' is correct. 'Send for my parents' is incorrect; it should be 'sing for my parents'. 'Opportunity' should be plural 'opportunities'. 'Punjabi lyrics music' is awkward; 'Punjabi lyrics' suffices.

× Yes, everyone. I think everyone thinks singing provide happiness to people because singing is a type of music which provide relaxation to other and also provide mind refreshing to people and individuals.

✓ Yes, I think everyone believes singing provides happiness to people because singing is a type of music that provides relaxation to others and also refreshes the mind of people and individuals.

The sentence has awkward phrasing and subject-verb agreement errors. 'Singing provide' should be 'singing provides' to agree with singular subject. 'Provide relaxation to other' should be 'provides relaxation to others'. 'Provide mind refreshing' is incorrect; 'refreshes the mind' is correct. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.