Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答中存在语义不清和表达混乱的问题，例如“stay in town”与唱歌无关，且句子结构不够自然。建议简化表达，直接说明不喜欢唱歌的原因，并避免无关内容。

Example: No, I don't like singing because I find it difficult and it makes me feel embarrassed. Therefore, I usually avoid singing in public or with my friends.

Suggestion: 回答中有重复词汇和语法错误，如“a a”、“things skills”、“to to”等。建议注意语法准确性，避免重复，同时可以用连接词使表达更流畅。

Example: Yes, I took a singing class in junior high school where I learned basic skills like breath control. However, I found singing quite difficult and believe it requires a lot of practice.

Suggestion: 回答中有重复词汇“they often”，句子较长且缺少连接词，导致表达不够连贯。建议使用连接词分句，使表达更清晰自然。

Example: I want to sing a song for my parents because they work hard to support our family and have raised me with love and care. They always support me whenever I face difficulties.

Suggestion: 回答中存在重复词汇和语法错误，如“a is an”、“I think I believe”、“seeing”应为“singing”，以及缺少主语和谓语的完整句子。建议注意语法准确性，避免重复，并确保用词正确。

Example: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. Music is an important part of cultures worldwide, and singing can help people feel relaxed and happy when they are in a bad mood.

× I remember that when I was in that class, I learned some basic things skills such as how to control my breath.

✓ I remember that when I was in that class, I learned some basic skills such as how to control my breath.

这里的“things skills”是多余的，应该只用“skills”表示“技能”，避免重复。

× But actually I found it very difficult for me to to sing and I think it need it needs a lot of practice.

✓ But actually I found it very difficult for me to sing and I think it needs a lot of practice.

动词“need”在第三人称单数形式时应加-s，变为“needs”。另外，“to to”是重复，应去掉一个“to”。

× I think it's very difficult for me to stay in town and it often makes me very embarrassed, so I often avoid singing in public and with my friends.

✓ I think it's very difficult for me to stay in tune and it often makes me very embarrassed, so I often avoid singing in public and with my friends.

原句中“stay in town”应为“stay in tune”，表示“保持音准”，这里是拼写错误。

× I want to sing a song for my parents because they often work hard to support our family and they brought me up with love and care and they often they often support me whenever I face the difficulties.

✓ I want to sing a song for my parents because they often work hard to support our family and they brought me up with love and care and they often support me whenever I face difficulties.

“the difficulties”前的定冠词“the”不必要，改为“difficulties”更自然。并且“they often they often”重复，应去掉一个。

× I think music is a is an important part of the cultures in the world.

✓ I think music is an important part of the cultures in the world.

“a is an”重复，应去掉“a is”，只保留“an”。

× So I think I believe seeing can make people feel relaxed and happy when they in a bad mood.

✓ So I think I believe singing can make people feel relaxed and happy when they are in a bad mood.

“seeing”应为“singing”，拼写错误；“when they in a bad mood”缺少动词“are”，应补充完整。