Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và lặp lại ý "I really like singing" không cần thiết. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể hơn về lý do bạn thích hát.

Example: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and forget about stress after studying. It is a great way to express my emotions and feel happy.

Suggestion: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "she want" thay vì "she wanted". Ngoài ra, hãy dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và bổ sung thêm chi tiết cụ thể về việc học hát.

Example: Yes, I have learned how to sing. My mother taught me when I was a child because she loved singing and wanted me to develop the same skill.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn không hoàn chỉnh và có lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích rõ hơn về lý do bạn muốn hát cho ai đó.

Example: I want to sing for my dad because he is the person I love the most. Singing allows me to express my feelings and show my appreciation for him.

Suggestion: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ như "hurt hurt" và sử dụng từ ngữ chính xác hơn. Hãy mở rộng câu trả lời với các lý do cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it helps people express their emotions and relieve stress. Moreover, singing can create a joyful atmosphere that uplifts everyone's mood.

× I do like singing because when I sing I feel relaxed and it makes me forget about anything bad or after studying and I really like singing.

✓ I do like singing because when I sing, I feel relaxed and it makes me forget about anything bad after studying. I really like singing.

The original sentence is a run-on sentence with unclear connections between ideas. Adding punctuation and separating ideas improves clarity and sentence structure.

× Yes I have and my mom, she taught me how to sing because she liked singing and she want me to sing like her.

✓ Yes, I have, and my mom taught me how to sing because she liked singing and she wanted me to sing like her.

The verb 'want' should be in past tense 'wanted' to match the past context. Also, 'she' after 'my mom' is redundant and can be omitted for clarity.

× So in my childhood she is my teacher.

✓ So in my childhood, she was my teacher.

The sentence refers to a past time ('childhood'), so the verb should be in past tense 'was' instead of present tense 'is'.

× Actually I went to sing for my dad because he's in my parent I love most and singing can keep my emotions to him.

✓ Actually, I sang for my dad because he is the parent I love most, and singing helps me express my emotions to him.

The original sentence has awkward phrasing and unclear meaning. 'Went to sing' is better as 'sang' for past action. 'He's in my parent I love most' is incorrect; it should be 'he is the parent I love most.' 'Singing can keep my emotions to him' is unclear; 'helps me express my emotions to him' is clearer.

× So if I have a.

✓ [Incomplete sentence; unable to correct without more context.]

The sentence is incomplete and cannot be corrected without additional information.

× Yes, I do think so, because singing can spread the feeling to everyone who hurt hurt.

✓ Yes, I do think so, because singing can spread feelings to everyone who is hurt.

The phrase 'hurt hurt' is incorrect and redundant. It should be 'everyone who is hurt' to correctly describe people who are emotionally hurt. Also, 'the feeling' should be plural 'feelings' to match the context.