Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但有语法错误和表达不自然的地方。建议使用更准确的表达，如“reduce my stress from school work”，并避免重复和不连贯的句子。

Example: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it makes my life more colorful and helps me reduce stress from school work.

Suggestion: 回答内容较完整，但句子结构不够流畅，且有语法错误。建议使用连贯的句子，并用连接词使表达更自然。

Example: Yes, I have learned how to sing by watching online videos, which are easily accessible and convenient for me. After watching, I practiced regularly to improve my skills.

Suggestion: 回答内容具体，但句子较长且重复。建议使用连接词简化句子，使表达更自然流畅。

Example: I want to sing for my parents to express my gratitude for their efforts, and for my friends, I like to sing songs as birthday or other special gifts.

Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整的问题。建议使用正确的词汇和完整的句子，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

Example: Absolutely. Singing can reduce people's stress from work or school. Moreover, if two people have an argument, singing a song together might help them reconcile.

× The one reason is that it will make my life more colorful and what's more, it can even reduce my suggest school work.

✓ The main reason is that it will make my life more colorful and, what's more, it can even reduce my stressful school work.

The phrase 'the one reason' is incorrect here; 'the main reason' is more appropriate to express the primary cause. Also, 'suggest school work' is a misuse of words; it should be 'stressful school work' to correctly describe the type of work that causes stress.

× Yes, I've learned how to sing through videos online which is accessible and. Convenient for me and I also practiced after watching those videos.

✓ Yes, I've learned how to sing through online videos, which are accessible and convenient for me, and I also practiced after watching those videos.

The original sentence has punctuation errors and awkward phrasing. 'Videos online which is accessible and. Convenient' is fragmented and incorrect. It should be 'online videos, which are accessible and convenient for me,' to correctly connect the clauses and maintain subject-verb agreement.

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Whom do you want to sing for?

In formal English, 'whom' is the correct object pronoun to use after a preposition like 'for'. Although 'who' is commonly used in speech, 'whom' is grammatically correct in this context.

× I want to sing for my parents and my friends, and for parents I want to sing songs to express my gratitude to them for their efforts.

✓ I want to sing for my parents and my friends, and for my parents, I want to sing songs to express my gratitude to them for their efforts.

The phrase 'for parents' lacks the possessive pronoun 'my', which is necessary to specify whose parents are being referred to.

× And for friends, I want to sing songs for them as birthday gifts or other gifts.

✓ And for my friends, I want to sing songs for them as birthday gifts or other gifts.

Similar to the previous sentence, 'for friends' should be 'for my friends' to correctly indicate possession.

× Absolutely, Seeing can reduce people's stress on work or schoolwork, and if two people have argues and if they sing a song together, maybe they will.

✓ Absolutely, singing can reduce people's stress from work or schoolwork, and if two people have an argument and sing a song together, maybe they will reconcile.

'Seeing' is a typo and should be 'singing'. 'Stress on work' is incorrect; 'stress from work' is the correct prepositional phrase. 'Have argues' is incorrect; it should be 'have an argument'. The sentence ends abruptly; adding 'reconcile' clarifies the intended meaning.