Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答时语法和时态使用不够准确，表达略显重复，建议简化句子结构，注意时态一致性，并避免冗余。

Example: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax when I feel stressed. For example, during my school days, singing reduced my pressure and improved my study efficiency.

Suggestion: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够连贯，建议使用简单句表达清楚观点，避免重复和语法错误。

Example: Yes, I have tried to learn singing, but it is difficult for me. However, I see it as a hobby, so I don't mind and want to keep trying.

Suggestion: 表达不清晰且语法错误较多，建议理清思路，使用简单句表达感情，避免重复和错误。

Example: I want to sing for my grandpa because he has passed away. I miss him very much and want to show my love through singing.

Suggestion: 回答中有语法和表达不准确的问题，建议简化句子，使用连贯的连接词，表达更清晰。

Example: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because it helps people relax and enjoy life. It can also improve their work or study efficiency, which leads to more happiness.

× So to reduce the pressure, I start to sing because singing can make me relax and that will improve my efficiency of study.

✓ So to reduce the pressure, I started to sing because singing can make me relax and that will improve my efficiency of study.

这里描述的是过去的动作，应该使用过去时态。将“start”改为“started”符合时态要求。

× Yes, I had tried to but that was so difficult for me because I Can't Sing like the the best people but I just I see a hobby so that's not a big deal but I need to try it.

✓ Yes, I tried to but that was so difficult for me because I can't sing like the best people but I just see it as a hobby so that's not a big deal but I need to try it.

“had tried”在这里不合适，简单过去时“tried”更符合语境。且“Can't Sing”中的大写错误应改为小写。

× Yes, I had tried to but that was so difficult for me because I Can't Sing like the the best people but I just I see a hobby so that's not a big deal but I need to try it.

✓ Yes, I tried to but that was so difficult for me because I can't sing like the best people but I just see it as a hobby so that's not a big deal but I need to try it.

“I see a hobby”中缺少宾语，应为“see it as a hobby”，这里“it”指代唱歌。

× I want to sing for my grandpa because my grandpa has passed away and I never seem to hurt to him so I wanna sing to him because I'm so missed him.

✓ I want to sing for my grandpa because my grandpa has passed away and I never seemed to hurt him so I wanna sing to him because I miss him so much.

“never seem to hurt to him”时态和用法错误，应为“never seemed to hurt him”；“I'm so missed him”语法错误，应为“I miss him so much”。

× I never seem to hurt to him

✓ I never seemed to hurt him

动词“hurt”后不需要介词“to”，直接加宾语即可。

× I'm so missed him.

✓ I miss him so much.

“missed”是过去分词，且“I'm missed him”结构错误，应使用主动语态“I miss him”。

× I so like him.

✓ I like him so much.

“I so like him”语序不正确，副词“so much”应放在动词后。

× I need to know him, make him know how I love him.

✓ I need to know him and make him know how much I love him.

缺少连词“and”，且“how I love him”应为“how much I love him”更自然。

× Yes, I sing. Singing can bring happiness to people because when people start to to sing they will feel relaxed and made a more likely to enjoy the life and maybe they will improve their efficiency of working or studying and next bring happiness to people.

✓ Yes, I sing. Singing can bring happiness to people because when people start to sing, they will feel relaxed and be more likely to enjoy life and maybe they will improve their efficiency in working or studying and then bring happiness to people.

“start to to sing”重复，应为“start to sing”；“made a more likely”语法错误，应为“be more likely”；“enjoy the life”中“the”多余，应为“enjoy life”；“efficiency of working”应为“efficiency in working”；“next bring happiness”应为“then bring happiness”。