Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more structured and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain your feelings about singing with specific reasons, avoiding repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I enjoy singing even though I think my voice is not very good. Singing helps me change my mood, especially when I feel sad or anxious, as it makes me feel better and more relaxed.

Suggestion: Focus on giving a clear and complete answer with proper sentence structure. Avoid filler words and repetition. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and provide specific details about your learning experience.

Example: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was a child by using singing apps. Although my voice was not very good and others did not like it, I was confident and enjoyed practicing.

Suggestion: Make your answer more complete and avoid unfinished sentences. Start with a clear topic sentence and explain your reason with specific details. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Example: If I had the chance, I would like to sing for all my friends because it would be fun to share my singing with them, even if my voice is not perfect. It would create a joyful and relaxed atmosphere.

Suggestion: Try to speak more fluently and avoid hesitation sounds like 'uh' and 'umm'. Use correct grammar and linking words to explain your opinion clearly with specific examples.

Example: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people, especially when the songs have a cheerful mood. However, if the song is sad or depressing, it might make people feel anxious or unhappy.

× Yes I do like singing but my voice is really bad.

✓ Yes, I do like singing, but my voice is really bad.

The original sentence is missing commas which help clarify the sentence structure. Adding commas improves readability and separates clauses properly.

× Like I I hate my voice, I don't like my voice and why do I like singing?

✓ Like, I hate my voice, I don't like my voice, and why do I like singing?

The sentence has repeated 'I' and missing commas. Removing the repeated word and adding commas improves clarity and flow.

× Because it actually changed the way I think when it comes to singing and when I'm actually depressed or like feeling sad or anxious I would refer to singing always.

✓ Because it actually changes the way I think when it comes to singing, and when I'm actually depressed or feeling sad or anxious, I always refer to singing.

The verb tense should be present 'changes' to match the habitual action. Also, word order and commas are adjusted for clarity and natural flow.

× This was when I was a kid, I used to download some syncing apps and I I think I was thinking that my voice was very nice and so on.

✓ This was when I was a kid. I used to download some singing apps, and I think I believed that my voice was very nice and so on.

The phrase 'I was thinking' is better expressed as 'I believed' for clarity. Also, 'syncing' is corrected to 'singing' as per context. Sentence is split for clarity.

× However, it was really, really bad and no, everyone hated my sound at that time, but I had the confidence to sing and that's.

✓ However, it was really, really bad, and no one hated my sound at that time, but I had the confidence to sing, and that's it.

The phrase 'no, everyone hated' is corrected to 'no one hated' to convey the intended meaning. Also, the sentence ending 'and that's' is incomplete and corrected to 'and that's it'.

× That's a pretty a funny question, but if I had the chance to, I would like to sing to all my friends and I would let them enjoy my really bad sound because it's actually quite funny to let them hear my sound because.

✓ That's a pretty funny question, but if I had the chance, I would like to sing to all my friends, and I would let them enjoy my really bad voice because it's actually quite funny to let them hear it.

Removed the extra 'a' before 'funny'. Simplified 'chance to' to 'chance'. Replaced 'sound' with 'voice' for naturalness. Removed redundant 'because' at the end.

× Of course it does bring happiness to people, especially, uh, if the songs was umm was like was like in a happily mood.

✓ Of course, it does bring happiness to people, especially if the song is in a happy mood.

Corrected 'songs was' to singular 'song is' to match subject-verb agreement and tense. 'Happily mood' corrected to 'happy mood' for adjective use.

× So it would bring happiness if depending on the on the type of song itself.

✓ So it would bring happiness depending on the type of song itself.

Removed unnecessary 'if' to correct sentence structure and improve clarity.

× For example, if it was like a depressing song, it would be make people anxious and sad.

✓ For example, if it was a depressing song, it would make people anxious and sad.

Removed unnecessary 'be' to correct verb phrase 'would make'. Also, 'like' is unnecessary before 'a depressing song'.