Part 1
Examiner
Do you like singing? Why?
Candidate
I don't like singing because I'm not confident in my singing ability.
Examiner
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Candidate
No, I haven't learn how to sing songs. Formal singing lessons as difficult for me to learn.
Examiner
Who do you want to sing for?
Candidate
I want to sing for my future husband. I think it's a very romantic atmosphere and we will marry for each other.
Examiner
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Candidate
Definitely seeing can bring peaceful and lawful atmosphere and it will be a romantic circumstance circumstance.
Do you like singing? Why?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 回答时应更自然流畅,避免简单重复。可以增加具体原因,表达更丰富的情感。
Example: I don't enjoy singing because I lack confidence in my vocal skills, which makes me feel self-conscious when I try to sing.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: 语法错误较多,句子不完整。应使用正确时态和句型,表达更清晰。
Example: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons because I find them quite challenging to follow.
Who do you want to sing for?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: 表达不够连贯,语法和用词有误。应使用连词连接句子,表达更自然。
Example: I would like to sing for my future husband because it would create a romantic atmosphere, especially on our wedding day.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Score: 45.0Suggestion: 回答中有多处错误,表达不清晰。应注意发音和用词准确,句子结构完整。
Example: Definitely, singing can create a peaceful and joyful atmosphere, making people feel happy and relaxed.
× No, I haven't learn how to sing songs.
✓ No, I haven't learnt how to sing songs.
这里使用的是现在完成时态,助动词'haven't'后面应该接动词的过去分词形式,'learn'的过去分词是'learnt'或'learned',因此应改为'haven't learnt'。
× Formal singing lessons as difficult for me to learn.
✓ Formal singing lessons are difficult for me to learn.
原句缺少谓语动词,导致句子结构不完整。应在'singing lessons'后加上系动词'are',使句子完整。
× I want to sing for my future husband.
✓ I want to sing to my future husband.
动词'sing'后面通常接介词'to'表示向某人唱歌,'for'表示为某人唱歌但不一定直接对其唱,语境中应使用'to'。
× I think it's a very romantic atmosphere and we will marry for each other.
✓ I think it's a very romantic atmosphere and we will marry each other.
短语'marry for each other'是不正确的表达,'marry'后直接接'reflexive pronoun'即可,正确用法是'marry each other'。
× Definitely seeing can bring peaceful and lawful atmosphere and it will be a romantic circumstance circumstance.
✓ Definitely singing can bring a peaceful and lawful atmosphere and it will be a romantic circumstance.
原句中'seeing'应为'singing',且'atmosphere'前缺少冠词'a','circumstance'重复出现,应删除多余的一个。