Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều từ lặp lại và sử dụng nhiều từ ngữ không tự nhiên như "umm" và "thing". Bạn nên tránh lặp lại từ và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ như "frequency" nên là "pitch" trong ngữ cảnh hát. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax after a stressful day at school. Moreover, singing improves my vocal control and pitch, which makes me feel more confident.

Suggestion: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ "practice singing" thay vì "practice singing" và tránh lặp lại từ như "I want I want". Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn về việc học hát.

Example: Yes, I have learned how to sing. When I was younger, I practiced singing every day to improve my vocal control and speed while performing songs.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ ngữ không chính xác, ví dụ "my mother is feel be very stressful" nên là "my mother feels very stressed". Bạn cũng nên tránh lặp lại từ và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn. Hãy cố gắng diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách mạch lạc và cụ thể hơn.

Example: I want to sing for my mother because she often feels stressed after work. Singing a song for her can help lift her mood and bring her happiness.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều từ lặp lại không cần thiết như "singing can singing". Bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không chính xác như "heal or soul" và cố gắng diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách mạch lạc, sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

Example: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it helps heal the soul and spread positive energy when we feel down.

× I realize I really enjoy singing because singing brings me a lot of positive energy and umm help me relax after a stressful day at school.

✓ I realize I really enjoy singing because singing brings me a lot of positive energy and umm helps me relax after a stressful day at school.

The verb 'help' should be in the third person singular form 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'singing'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue related to verb form with third person singular subjects.

× Not only reduce stressful UMM thing is also important to umm improve my frequency, voice and umm my control.

✓ Not only does it reduce stress, but it is also important to improve my pitch, voice, and control.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a clear subject and verb structure. 'Not only' requires an auxiliary verb and subject to form a correct sentence. Also, 'reduce stressful UMM thing' is unclear and ungrammatical. The correction provides a clear subject and verb and corrects the phrase to 'reduce stress'.

× When I was shy I really enjoyed practice singing every day.

✓ When I was shy, I really enjoyed practicing singing every day.

After 'enjoy', the verb should be in the gerund form '-ing'. Also, a comma is needed after the introductory clause. 'Practice' should be 'practicing' to be grammatically correct.

× So I want I want to control my frequency, voice and improve my speed while I singing a song.

✓ So I want to control my pitch, voice, and improve my speed while I am singing a song.

The phrase 'while I singing' is incorrect; it should be 'while I am singing' to use the present continuous tense correctly. Also, 'frequency' is better replaced with 'pitch' in this context.

× I want to sing for my mother, uh, because, uh, my mother is feel be very stressful after Friday at this company.

✓ I want to sing for my mother because she feels very stressed after Fridays at her company.

The phrase 'my mother is feel be very stressful' is incorrect. The correct form is 'she feels very stressed'. Also, 'after Friday at this company' is unclear; 'after Fridays at her company' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× So I want to bring, uh, a lot of a lot of my positive energy for my mother by by singing a song of my song can help my mother us.

✓ So I want to bring a lot of positive energy to my mother by singing a song that can help her.

The original sentence is repetitive and ungrammatical. 'A lot of a lot of' is redundant. 'A song of my song can help my mother us' is unclear and incorrect. The correction simplifies and clarifies the sentence structure.

× Sure, I believe singing can bring a lot of positive energy to people. Umm singing can singing. Singing can heal or soul a lot when we when we feel a lot of positive energy for for us for.

✓ Sure, I believe singing can bring a lot of positive energy to people. Singing can heal our soul a lot when we feel down and can give us a lot of positive energy.

The original sentences contain repetition and unclear phrases like 'singing can singing' and 'heal or soul a lot'. The correction removes redundancy and clarifies the meaning with proper sentence structure.