Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more concise and avoid filler words like 'like' and repeated phrases. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific reasons or examples. For instance, mention when you started liking singing and why you enjoy it, keeping it within 3-4 sentences.

Example: Yes, I enjoy singing a lot. Although I didn't like it much when I was younger, I started appreciating it more as I grew older. Now, I often sing alone because it helps me relax and express my emotions.

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but could be improved by avoiding hesitation and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide a clear structure: state whether you have learned singing, then explain how you improved with examples.

Example: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons. However, I have practiced singing on my own over the years, which has helped me improve gradually. My friends often tell me that my singing has gotten better.

Suggestion: Avoid repeating ideas and filler phrases. Start with a clear statement about who you want to sing for, then explain why with specific details. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and concise.

Example: Although I'm not a great singer, I would love to sing for my parents because they mean a lot to me. Singing a special song for them would be a memorable way to show my appreciation.

Suggestion: Your answer is good but could be improved by elaborating more on how singing brings happiness with specific examples or reasons. Also, avoid repeating 'for me' and try to use varied vocabulary and linking words to connect ideas.

Example: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because it allows people to express their emotions and connect with others. For example, singing can lift someone's mood or create a joyful atmosphere during celebrations.

× But now that I am an I am 18, I really like it.

✓ But now that I am 18, I really like it.

The phrase 'I am an I am 18' contains a repetition and an unnecessary article 'an' before '18'. The correct form is 'I am 18' because '18' is a number and does not require an article.

× I although I don't sing very good, but yeah, I would like to sing.

✓ Although I don't sing very well, yeah, I would like to sing.

The word 'good' is an adjective, but here it should be an adverb modifying the verb 'sing'. The correct adverb form is 'well'. Also, the sentence structure is improved by removing the redundant conjunction 'but' after 'although'.