Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by correcting grammar and avoiding redundancy. For example, say "I don't like singing because I've never learned to sing properly, and I find it difficult to keep in tune." Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question.

Example: I don't like singing because I've never learned to sing properly, and I find it difficult to keep in tune.

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but could be improved by using linking words and more precise vocabulary. For example, use "focused on" instead of "focused more in" and add linking words like "however" to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: No, I haven't. When I was a kid, we had music lessons; however, they focused on learning to play instruments, so I never had the opportunity to learn how to sing.

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding repetition. Use linking words to connect your ideas. For example, "I don't feel confident with my singing skills, so I don't have anyone in mind to sing for at the moment."

Example: I don't feel confident with my singing skills, so I don't have anyone in mind to sing for at the moment.

Suggestion: Your answer is incomplete and contains fillers like "umm". Try to give a complete, clear response with linking words and specific details. For example, "Yes, I believe singing and other forms of artistic expression can bring happiness because they allow people to express their feelings and emotions."

Example: Yes, I believe singing and other forms of artistic expression can bring happiness because they allow people to express their feelings and emotions.

× it's quite hard to me to have a good reading

✓ it's quite hard for me to have a good reading

The preposition 'to' is incorrectly used after 'hard'. The correct preposition in this context is 'for', as in 'hard for me'. This is a common collocation in English.

× these were focused more in learning to play instruments

✓ these were focused more on learning to play instruments

The verb 'focused' is typically followed by the preposition 'on' rather than 'in'. Therefore, 'focused more on learning' is the correct form.

× I don't think right now I will be able to sing to someone

✓ I don't think right now I will be able to sing for someone

The verb 'sing' is usually followed by the preposition 'for' when indicating the audience. Using 'to' is incorrect in this context.

× I think yes it can umm singing and every art expression can bring happiness to people and I believe with singing umm people can express feelings and emotions which is amazing and also.

✓ I think yes, singing and every form of art expression can bring happiness to people, and I believe that with singing, people can express feelings and emotions, which is amazing.

The original sentence is a run-on with missing conjunctions and punctuation, making it unclear. Breaking it into clearer clauses and adding necessary words improves readability and grammatical correctness.