Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating 'a song' and use correct expressions like 'my voice is not good.' Also, try to add a linking phrase to connect your ideas smoothly.

Example: To be honest, I don't enjoy singing because my voice isn't very good; however, I love listening to music.

Suggestion: Your answer has grammatical errors and lacks clarity. Use correct verb forms and articles, and try to make your sentence more coherent by using linking words.

Example: No, I have never taken singing lessons, but a friend once gave me some tips on how to improve my singing.

Suggestion: Your answer contains grammar mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use correct verb forms and expressions like 'I have doubts about my voice.' Also, try to make your answer more natural and fluent.

Example: To be honest, I don't want to sing for anyone because my voice isn't good, and I have doubts about how I sound.

Suggestion: Your answer is too short and lacks explanation. Even if you disagree, try to provide reasons or examples to support your opinion, and use more natural expressions.

Example: Actually, I think singing can bring happiness to many people because it helps them relax and express their emotions.

× I don't like singing a song because my vocal is not good, but I love to listen a song.

✓ I don't like singing songs because my voice is not good, but I love to listen to songs.

The phrase 'a song' is incorrectly used with 'singing' and 'listen'. 'Singing' is a general activity, so 'songs' (plural) is more appropriate. Also, 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' before the object. Additionally, 'vocal' is a noun related to singing but 'voice' is the correct word to describe the quality of one's sound when singing or speaking.

× No, I never learned how to sing a song but one of my friend who gave me some tips to singing a song.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing a song, but one of my friends gave me some tips on singing songs.

The sentence has tense inconsistency and singular/plural errors. 'Never learned' should be 'have never learned' to match the present perfect tense for experience. 'One of my friend' should be 'one of my friends' (plural). 'Tips to singing a song' should be 'tips on singing songs' because 'tips on' is the correct preposition and 'singing songs' is the correct gerund phrase.

× No, I never learned how to sing a song but one of my friend who gave me some tips to singing a song.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing a song, but one of my friends gave me some tips on singing songs.

The phrase 'a song' is singular but the context implies general singing, so 'songs' (plural) is more appropriate. Also, 'tips on' is the correct preposition to use with 'singing'.

× To be honest I don't want to singing a song for anyone because my vocal is not good and I have also doubt on my voice.

✓ To be honest, I don't want to sing a song for anyone because my voice is not good and I also have doubts about my voice.

'Don't want to singing' is incorrect; after 'want to' the base verb 'sing' should be used. 'Vocal' should be 'voice' to describe the sound quality. 'I have also doubt' should be 'I also have doubts' (plural) and 'doubt on' should be 'doubts about' for correct preposition usage.