Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating 'singing' unnecessarily and try to combine ideas smoothly. For example, you could say why singing helps you and mention your confidence more naturally.

Example: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relieve stress, and I feel confident since I know many songs well.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about what you have done to learn singing.

Example: Yes, I have been learning to sing since primary school. Moreover, I am currently trying to join a singing class to improve my skills.

Suggestion: Your answer has good content but needs clearer structure and grammar. Use linking words to connect your ideas and correct word choices, such as 'sing for' instead of 'sing to'. Also, express feelings more naturally.

Example: I would like to sing for my favourite singer, Abby. Singing with her would make me feel fulfilled and successful because she inspired my passion for singing.

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit confusing and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to answer directly and use simple, clear language. Explain how singing affects people's emotions with specific examples.

Example: Yes, I believe singing cheerful songs can express happiness and help people feel more joyful.

× Yes, I have learned these things since I'm primary school in I'm trying to join some which can improve my singing skills.

✓ Yes, I have learned these things since I was in primary school and I am trying to join some groups which can improve my singing skills.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'I'm primary school' instead of 'I was in primary school', which is a past tense context. Also, 'I'm trying' should be 'I am trying' for clarity. The phrase 'join some which can improve' is incomplete; it should specify 'groups' or 'classes'. The correction uses past tense 'was' for the time reference and clarifies the sentence structure.

× I want to sing to my favorite singer, which is Abby.

✓ I want to sing to my favourite singer, who is Abby.

The relative pronoun 'which' is incorrectly used for a person; 'who' should be used instead. 'Which' refers to things, while 'who' refers to people. Also, 'favourite' is the British English spelling.

× When I can sing with her, I can feel fulfillment and successful because she gave me the passions of singing.

✓ When I can sing with her, I can feel fulfilled and successful because she gave me the passion for singing.

The adjective 'fulfillment' is a noun; the correct adjective form is 'fulfilled'. 'Passions' should be singular 'passion' when referring to a general feeling, and 'of singing' should be 'for singing' to express the cause of passion.

× I think I'm good at singing because I know many of the songs.

✓ I think I'm good at singing because I know many songs.

The phrase 'many of the songs' is awkward unless referring to a specific set of songs previously mentioned. 'Many songs' is more natural and general here.

× Yes, singing a rhyme that is present and brisk can express a delightful feelings to people and can let them be more happy.

✓ Yes, singing a rhyme that is pleasant and brisk can express delightful feelings to people and can make them happier.

'Present' is incorrect; 'pleasant' fits the context. 'A delightful feelings' mixes singular and plural; it should be 'delightful feelings'. 'Can let them be more happy' is awkward; 'can make them happier' is the correct comparative form and phrasing.