Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答时时态不一致，且表达略显重复。建议使用一致的时态，避免重复表达，使语言更自然流畅。

Example: I love singing because it makes me feel like I'm the only person in the world, and it helps me relax and feel comfortable.

Suggestion: 句子结构不完整，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，明确表达学习方式，并避免模糊词汇。

Example: I have learned to sing by watching fun videos on the Internet, although it was not a formal method. I often sing along with the songs to practice.

Suggestion: 表达中有语法错误和用词不当，如'scene'应为'singing'. 建议注意词汇准确性，并简洁表达理由。

Example: I want to sing for myself because I am not very confident when singing in front of others, and I don't want to feel awkward.

Suggestion: 回答中充满犹豫词和不完整句子，表达不清晰。建议减少口头语，使用完整句子，清晰表达观点并提供具体理由。

Example: Of course, singing can bring happiness to people because it allows them to escape from stress and feel joyful and relaxed.

× I love singing because it can make me feel like I was the only person in the world and it made me, it made me feel very comfortable and relaxed.

✓ I love singing because it can make me feel like I am the only person in the world and it makes me feel very comfortable and relaxed.

这里的时态使用不正确。因为表达的是现在的感受，应该用一般现在时，而不是过去时。将“was”改为“am”，“made”改为“makes”更符合语境。

× I used to find fun video on the Internet to learn how to sing, but not so formal.

✓ I used to find fun videos on the Internet to learn how to sing, but not so formal.

“video”应使用复数形式“videos”，因为这里指的是多个视频。单复数不一致导致语法错误。

× I want to sing for myself because I'm not very confident with my scene and I don't want to feel awkward before anyone else.

✓ I want to sing for myself because I'm not very confident with my singing and I don't want to feel awkward in front of anyone else.

“scene”应为“singing”，意思是“唱歌”；“before anyone else”应改为“in front of anyone else”，表示“在别人面前”。代词和介词使用错误导致表达不清。

× it can bring much happiness to people because, uh, when you are singing or listening to a song, you will umm, feel like you are in other words, and where the world is full of joy, happiness, umm, bring you out of stress, umm, and make you feel uh.

✓ It can bring a lot of happiness to people because, uh, when you are singing or listening to a song, you will, umm, feel like you are in another world, where the world is full of joy and happiness, umm, bringing you out of stress, umm, and making you feel, uh.

“much happiness”通常用于不可数名词，口语中更自然用“a lot of happiness”；“in other words”应为“in another world”，表达“置身另一个世界”的意思；句子结构和用词需调整以使表达更通顺。