Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer should be more natural and clear. Try to avoid redundancy and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why you like singing, and mention your recent experience with the competition.

Example: Yes, I like singing because I have loved it since childhood. I started learning singing techniques early on, which helped me improve a lot. Recently, I auditioned for a singing competition called Boys of Nepal and I passed. Singing brings me joy and I enjoy performing.

Suggestion: Your answer needs to be clearer and more structured. Use correct grammar and vocabulary. Explain what you learned in singing class with specific details and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Example: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was a child at school. There was a singing class where I learned various singing techniques and about different ragas, including some Western styles. I really enjoyed these lessons because they helped me improve my skills.

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more fluent and natural. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid repetition. Express your feelings clearly and directly.

Example: I want to sing for my mom because I find it hard to express my love for her in words. Singing allows me to show my feelings in a special way. As her son, I enjoy dedicating songs to her.

Suggestion: Your answer should be more organized and grammatically correct. Use appropriate vocabulary and linking words to explain your ideas clearly. Avoid vague expressions and be specific about how singing brings happiness.

Example: Yes, I believe singing is a beautiful gift from God that brings happiness to people. When people listen to songs, they often feel very joyful or 'over the moon.' Different people enjoy different types of music depending on their mood, such as happy or sad songs.

× I started to sing and I learned there are some singing technique.

✓ I started to sing and I learned there are some singing techniques.

The word 'technique' should be plural 'techniques' because it refers to multiple methods or skills related to singing. In English, countable nouns need to be plural when referring to more than one.

× Now I sing a really pretty good and recently I go to Boys of Nepal as well, which is singing competition and I make a audition and just I pass the audition.

✓ Now I sing really well and recently I went to Boys of Nepal as well, which is a singing competition, and I made an audition and I just passed the audition.

'Pretty good' is an adjective phrase and should be replaced with the adverb 'really well' to describe singing. 'Go' should be in past tense 'went' to match the past event. 'Singing competition' needs the article 'a' before it. 'Audition' is a countable noun and requires the article 'an' before it. 'Make a audition' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'made an audition' or better 'auditioned'. 'Just I pass' should be 'I just passed' to follow correct word order and past tense.

× Yeah, back in the childhood in my school there is a singing class, so I learned there are singing techniques and about some rag arms, which is some western Saigon.

✓ Yeah, back in my childhood at my school there was a singing class, so I learned singing techniques and about some ragas, which are some western songs.

'There is' should be 'there was' to match past tense. 'Back in the childhood' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'back in my childhood'. 'In my school' should be 'at my school' for correct preposition. 'Singing techniques' is plural. 'Rag arms' seems to be a mishearing or misspelling; likely 'ragas' (musical modes) or 'songs'. 'Which is' should be 'which are' to agree with plural 'ragas' or 'songs'.

× I want to sing for my mom because I cannot express my feelings when it comes to love to your mom and just I have love, but I can express my feelings to my mom.

✓ I want to sing for my mom because I cannot express my feelings when it comes to love for your mom, and although I have love, I cannot express my feelings to my mom.

The pronoun 'your mom' is incorrect here; it should be 'my mom' to maintain consistency. The sentence structure is awkward; 'just I have love' is unclear and corrected to 'although I have love'. 'Cannot express' is repeated for clarity.

× Musical things is a really beautiful things which is gifted by God and it brings a very much happy whenever people listen song they feel over the moon and some people love to listen music in their different types of switches and like some people like to listen music in sad.

✓ Musical things are really beautiful things which are gifts from God, and they bring a lot of happiness. Whenever people listen to songs, they feel over the moon. Some people love to listen to music in different moods, and some people like to listen to music when they are sad.

'Musical things is' should be 'Musical things are' to agree in number. 'Beautiful things' is plural, so 'is' should be 'are'. 'Gifted by God' is better as 'gifts from God'. 'Brings a very much happy' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'bring a lot of happiness'. 'Listen song' should be 'listen to songs'. 'In their different types of switches' is unclear; corrected to 'in different moods'. 'Like some people like to listen music in sad' corrected to 'some people like to listen to music when they are sad' for clarity and grammar.