Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn cần sử dụng ngữ pháp chính xác hơn và tránh lỗi sai như 'sings' thay vì 'sing'. Ngoài ra, bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn (ví dụ: 'unwise relieve stressed' không đúng, nên dùng 'helps relieve stress'). Hãy cố gắng trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lặp từ và dùng câu hoàn chỉnh.

Example: Yes, I really enjoy singing karaoke because it allows me to have fun with my friends and family during celebrations. I believe it's a great way to bond and helps me relieve stress effectively.

Suggestion: Bạn nên cải thiện cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Tránh dùng từ không cần thiết như 'umm' và cấu trúc câu nên chính xác hơn. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và có cấu trúc rõ ràng.

Example: No, I haven't taken formal singing lessons. Instead, I usually listen to original singers and try to imitate their style, so I have learned to sing by myself.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'she's always have supported' nên là 'she has always supported'. Ngoài ra, bạn nên dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ.

Example: Honestly, I don't have a specific person in mind right now, but if I had to choose, it would be my mom because she has always supported me. Singing for her would be the best way to express my gratitude.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không phù hợp và nhiều từ không cần thiết như 'umm'. Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt ý tưởng rõ ràng, sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu hoàn chỉnh để truyền đạt ý nghĩa một cách hiệu quả.

Example: Yes, definitely. Singing can bring great happiness because the sound and emotions in a song can uplift people's mood and make them feel joyful.

× To be honest, singing karaoke is one of my favorite.

✓ To be honest, singing karaoke is one of my favorites.

The phrase 'one of my favorite' is incomplete because 'favorite' should be plural when referring to one item among many favorites. The correct form is 'one of my favorites.'

× I usually sings with my friends, my hobbies, my babies or my family in birthday parties or all the celebrations.

✓ I usually sing with my friends, my hobbies, my babies or my family at birthday parties or all the celebrations.

The verb 'sing' should be in the base form 'sing' after 'I' because 'I' is first person singular and does not take the 's' ending. Also, 'in birthday parties' should be 'at birthday parties' because 'at' is the correct preposition for events.

× I usually sings with my friends, my hobbies, my babies or my family in birthday parties or all the celebrations.

✓ I usually sing with my friends, my hobbies, my babies or my family at birthday parties or all the celebrations.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to events like 'birthday parties'; the correct preposition is 'at.'

× I think it's the best way to bond with other people and unwise relieve stressed.

✓ I think it's the best way to bond with other people and wisely relieve stress.

The word 'unwise' is an adjective but the sentence requires an adverb modifying the verb 'relieve,' so 'wisely' is correct. Also, 'stressed' is an adjective; the noun 'stress' should be used here.

× No I haven't umm I always listen to music by the singer originally and then follow them how to sing.

✓ No, I haven't. Umm, I always listen to music by the original singer and then follow them to learn how to sing.

The phrase 'by the singer originally' is awkward; 'by the original singer' is correct. Also, 'follow them how to sing' is incorrect; it should be 'follow them to learn how to sing.'

× I learned it by myself.

✓ I have learned it by myself.

Since the action is connected to the present (learning singing), present perfect 'have learned' is more appropriate than simple past 'learned.'

× Honestly I haven't had a person in my mind right now but if I have to choose that would be my mom because she's always have supported me to do what I want and singing for her would be the best way to express my gratitude.

✓ Honestly, I don't have a person in my mind right now, but if I had to choose, that would be my mom because she's always supported me to do what I want, and singing for her would be the best way to express my gratitude.

'I haven't had a person in my mind right now' is incorrect because 'right now' requires present tense 'don't have.' Also, 'if I have to choose' should be 'if I had to choose' for hypothetical. 'She's always have supported' is incorrect; it should be 'she's always supported.'

× Honestly I haven't had a person in my mind right now but if I have to choose that would be my mom because she's always have supported me to do what I want and singing for her would be the best way to express my gratitude.

✓ Honestly, I don't have a person in my mind right now, but if I had to choose, that would be my mom because she's always supported me to do what I want, and singing for her would be the best way to express my gratitude.

The phrase 'in my mind' is acceptable but 'on my mind' is more common; however, 'in my mind' is not incorrect. The main issue is tense and verb form, as explained above.

× Yes definitely umm singing can bring the biggest happiness to the people because umm, when people hearing the sounds of the voice and the feeling, the thumb, the theme uh is the good way to uplift it move and umm when I see.

✓ Yes, definitely. Umm, singing can bring great happiness to people because, when people hear the sound of the voice and the feeling, the mood, the theme, it is a good way to uplift and move them, and umm, when I see it.

'When people hearing' is incorrect; it should be 'when people hear' (present simple). 'The biggest happiness' is awkward; 'great happiness' is more natural. The sentence is fragmented and unclear; 'thumb' is likely a mispronunciation or error and replaced with 'mood.' The phrase 'uplift it move' is incorrect; it should be 'uplift and move them.'