Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법적 오류가 많으며, 중복된 표현이 있습니다. 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 구성하고, 문법과 어휘 사용에 주의하세요.

Example: Yes, I like singing because I joined my university band club. We practice regularly to become better performers, and I really enjoy singing with them.

Suggestion: 답변이 명확하지 않고 문법적 오류가 심합니다. 질문에 직접적으로 답하고, 문장을 간결하고 정확하게 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Example: No, I have never taken singing lessons, but I try to improve by practicing regularly and watching online tutorials.

Suggestion: 답변이 중복되고 문법적으로 부정확합니다. 명확한 주제 문장과 구체적인 이유를 포함하여 간결하게 답변하세요.

Example: I want to sing for my parents because my father is a professional singer. I hope to become a better singer than him and make him proud.

Suggestion: 문법 오류와 어색한 표현이 있습니다. 명확하고 자연스러운 문장으로 감정을 표현하고 이유를 구체적으로 설명하세요.

Example: Absolutely, singing is very relaxing and can improve people's mood. I believe it has more power to bring happiness than we usually realize.

× Yes, I like singing because I joined my university band clubs, so we try try to the better performers and yes, so I like sing.

✓ Yes, I like singing because I joined my university band clubs, so we try to be better performers and yes, so I like singing.

The phrase 'try try to the better performers' is incorrect. The correct form is 'try to be better performers' where 'try to' is followed by the base verb 'be'. Also, 'I like sing' should be 'I like singing' because after 'like' when expressing enjoyment, the gerund form is used.

× No, I have not learned to think but I try to singing better so I have a opportunity of learn to how the thing better I tried them.

✓ No, I have not learned to sing but I try to sing better so I have an opportunity to learn how to do things better. I tried them.

The phrase 'learned to think' should be 'learned to sing' to match context. 'Try to singing' is incorrect; it should be 'try to sing' because 'try to' is followed by the base verb. 'A opportunity' should be 'an opportunity' due to vowel sound. 'Learn to how the thing better' is incorrect; correct form is 'learn how to do things better'. 'I tried them' is acceptable but contextually vague.

× I want to sing for my parents because my father is professional singer so I play to sing better than my father so I want to sing for my father.

✓ I want to sing for my parents because my father is a professional singer, so I plan to sing better than my father. So I want to sing for my father.

'Play to sing' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'plan to sing'. Also, 'professional singer' needs the article 'a' before it. The sentence is split for clarity.

× Absolutely, singing makes very relaxing and make a feel better. So I believe the power of The thing is more than we think.

✓ Absolutely, singing makes me very relaxed and makes me feel better. So I believe the power of singing is more than we think.

'Makes very relaxing' is incorrect; it should be 'makes me very relaxed' to use the adjective correctly with a subject. 'Make a feel better' should be 'makes me feel better'. 'The power of The thing' is vague; 'the power of singing' is clearer and grammatically correct.