Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Paranna vastauksesi luonnollisuutta ja selkeyttä korjaamalla sanavalinnat ja kielioppi. Käytä oikeaa verbiä 'singing' ja vältä toistoa. Lisää linkkisanat, kuten 'because' tai 'so', jotta vastaus on johdonmukainen.

Example: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relieve stress and makes me feel happier. Also, singing is a way to express my happiness to others.

Suggestion: Vastauksessa on paljon epäselvyyksiä ja kielioppivirheitä. Pyri vastaamaan suoraan ja selkeästi, käytä yksinkertaisia lauseita ja linkkisanat kuten 'but' tai 'however' selkeyttämään vastausta.

Example: No, I have never formally learnt how to sing. However, after I came to Finland, my Finnish friend told me that there are singing clubs at high school and university where teachers and volunteers teach students.

Suggestion: Vastauksessa on epäselvyyksiä ja kielioppivirheitä. Vastaa suoraan ja käytä linkkisanat kuten 'for example' tai 'also' selventämään ajatuksia.

Example: It depends on the occasion. For example, last time I sang for my friend's birthday. I sang not only the birthday song but also some music she likes.

Suggestion: Vastauksessa on ristiriitaisuuksia ja kielioppivirheitä. Ole selkeä ja johdonmukainen, käytä linkkisanat kuten 'because' tai 'and' ja tarkenna sisältöä.

Example: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because happy songs can lift their mood. Also, singing in a relaxed environment can make people feel joyful.

× Yes, I like seeing.

✓ Yes, I like singing.

The student used 'seeing' instead of 'singing'. 'Singing' is the correct gerund form of the verb 'sing' to express the activity they like. 'Seeing' means to perceive with eyes, which is incorrect here.

× I like seeing when I have a pressure, I can release my pressure and when I feel happier.

✓ I like singing when I am under pressure because I can release my stress and feel happier.

The phrase 'have a pressure' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'be under pressure'. Also, 'pressure' is better replaced with 'stress' in this context. The sentence structure was improved for clarity.

× Seeing also is a way to show my happy.

✓ Singing is also a way to show my happiness.

'Happy' is an adjective, but here a noun 'happiness' is needed to express the feeling. Also, 'seeing' should be 'singing'.

× No, actually, I just know after I come here, come to Finland, my finish friend, tell me here in high school and university there are some club clubs.

✓ No, actually, I only found out after I came here to Finland that my Finnish friend told me there are some clubs in high school and university.

The verbs 'come' and 'tell' should be in past tense 'came' and 'told' to match the past time frame. 'Finish' should be 'Finnish'. 'Club clubs' is redundant; 'clubs' is sufficient.

× The teacher and the volunteers can teach you teacher, student, how to singing.

✓ The teacher and the volunteers can teach you, teachers and students, how to sing.

After 'teach', the base form of the verb 'sing' is used, not the '-ing' form. Also, 'teacher, student' should be pluralized and clarified.

× Yes, user thing scheme us goose.

✓ [Unable to correct due to unclear sentence.]

The sentence is unclear and does not form a coherent statement, so correction is not possible.

× That depends when.

✓ That depends on when.

The phrase 'depends when' is incorrect; the correct preposition 'on' is needed after 'depends'.

× Last time my friends birthday icing for her is not just the only the birthday song and also some music she likes and I think for her, yeah.

✓ Last time, for my friend's birthday, I sang not only the birthday song but also some music she likes, and I think she liked it.

'Friends birthday' should be 'friend's birthday' to show possession. 'Icing' is incorrect; likely meant 'singing'. The sentence structure was improved for clarity and grammar.

× Yes, definitely. Not definitely, but if there is a hapiness song, of course seeing will bring happy to people and also when there is some normal environment and the thing will bring the hapiness to people.

✓ Yes, definitely. Not always, but if there is a happy song, of course singing will bring happiness to people, and also in a normal environment, singing can bring happiness to people.

'Not definitely' is unclear; 'not always' is better. 'Hapiness' is misspelled; correct is 'happiness'. 'Seeing' should be 'singing'. 'Bring happy' should be 'bring happiness'. The sentence was restructured for clarity.