Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer shows enthusiasm but lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences clear and concise, directly answering the question with a topic sentence followed by supporting details. Avoid redundancy and ensure correct grammar usage.

Example: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and refresh my mind after studying. For example, when I feel tired, singing a song lifts my mood and encourages me to continue my work.

Suggestion: Your answer is informative but a bit confusing due to unclear phrasing. Use simple and clear sentences to express your ideas. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Example: No, I have never learned how to sing professionally. However, singing runs in my family, as my grandmother and father are good singers. I can recognize some musical notes, but I have not taken any formal training.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Make sure to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details. Avoid vague phrases and check your sentence structure.

Example: If I get a chance to sing in the future, I would like to sing for my parents. I want to dedicate emotional songs that express my gratitude for their sacrifices and support.

Suggestion: Your answer has good ideas but is difficult to understand due to unclear sentence structure. Use simple sentences and linking words to make your answer coherent and logical. Provide specific examples to support your opinion.

Example: In my opinion, singing brings happiness in many ways. For example, happy songs can make joyful moments even better, while sad songs help people express their feelings. Therefore, singing reflects people's emotions and brings comfort.

× I do Adore's singing and I love singing because it helps me to fresh up after some kind of activity like studying or listening to music or singing helps. Me encouraged and make me fresh.

✓ I do adore singing and I love singing because it helps me to freshen up after some kind of activity like studying or listening to music. Singing helps me feel encouraged and makes me fresh.

The sentence has incorrect pronoun usage such as 'Adore's' instead of 'adore' and 'Me encouraged' instead of 'helps me feel encouraged'. Also, 'fresh up' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'freshen up'. The sentence is corrected to use proper pronouns and verb forms for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Unfortunately, no, I have not learned how to sing, but it was a little genetical in my side because from my grandmother to my dad and from my father to me, I know some notes and apart from this I have not taken any professional license.

✓ Unfortunately, no, I have not learned how to sing, but it is a little genetic on my side because from my grandmother to my dad and from my father to me, I know some notes. Apart from this, I have not taken any professional lessons.

The phrase 'it was a little genetical in my side' is incorrect. 'Genetical' is not a proper adjective; 'genetic' is correct. Also, 'license' is incorrect in this context; 'lessons' or 'training' is appropriate. The tense 'was' is changed to 'is' to reflect a current fact. The sentence is corrected for proper adjective use and tense consistency.

× If in future I ever get a chance to sing, then I would like to sing for my payments.

✓ If in the future I ever get a chance to sing, then I would like to sing for my parents.

The word 'payments' is incorrect here; the intended word is likely 'parents'. Also, 'in future' should be 'in the future' for correct prepositional usage. The sentence is corrected to reflect the intended meaning and proper pronoun use.

× An emotional song, any song that could describe how many sacrifices they have. Date for me and I would love to thank them.

✓ An emotional song, any song that could describe how many sacrifices they have made for me, and I would love to thank them.

The word 'Date' is incorrect and seems to be a typo for 'made'. Also, the sentence structure is fragmented. The correction includes fixing the typo and combining the fragments into a coherent sentence with proper prepositions.

× In my point of view singing brings happiness to people from different type of ways like if someone is happy and singing can make the moment more special and sad song also represent the people's nature and in this way I can think the singing adores people nature.

✓ In my point of view, singing brings happiness to people in different types of ways. For example, if someone is happy, singing can make the moment more special. Sad songs also represent people's nature, and in this way, I think singing adores people's nature.

The phrase 'from different type of ways' is incorrect; it should be 'in different types of ways'. Also, the sentence is run-on and lacks proper punctuation. 'I can think' is better as 'I think'. The correction improves preposition use, sentence structure, and clarity.