Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 你的回答表达不够清晰，语法和词汇使用存在错误，导致意思难以理解。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复和语法错误。

Example: I don't like singing very much because I think my voice is unpleasant and often off-key. However, I enjoy singing when I am at concerts or stadiums with my friends because the atmosphere is exciting.

Suggestion: 回答中语法和表达不准确，内容不够具体。建议直接回答问题，并用具体例子或原因支持观点。

Example: No, I have never learned how to sing. For many years, I didn't consider music as something for me, but after discovering a singer I really admire, I started to think that music is a professional skill worth learning.

Suggestion: 回答表达了想法，但句子结构重复且不够流畅。建议使用连贯的句子表达愿望，并适当使用连接词。

Example: I want to sing for myself because I hope to improve my singing skills and have a pleasant voice. If I can sing well one day, it will be a reward for my hard work.

Suggestion: 回答内容不连贯，表达不清晰。建议用完整句子说明观点，并举具体例子支持。

Example: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. For example, at concerts, fans not only enjoy the singer's performance but also sing along themselves, which creates a joyful atmosphere.

× Not much actually, because I sank.

✓ Not much actually, because I sing badly.

这里'sank'是过去式，且用法不当，应该用动词的现在分词形式或副词来描述唱歌的状态。正确表达应为“I sing badly”，表示现在的情况。

× My voice is not pleasant and why I'm seeing is always not that cracked.

✓ My voice is not pleasant and when I'm singing, it is always a bit cracked.

原句中'why I'm seeing'应为'when I'm singing'，且'not that cracked'表达不自然，改为'a bit cracked'更符合英语习惯。

× Uh, but sometimes in concert or in the stadium with my friends.

✓ Uh, but sometimes I sing in concerts or in the stadium with my friends.

原句缺少主语和谓语，导致句子不完整。需要补充主语和谓语使句子完整。

× I love scene. I in that situation.

✓ I love the scene. I enjoy being in that situation.

'scene'应加定冠词'the'表示特定场景，'I in that situation'缺少谓语，需改为'I enjoy being in that situation'。

× The past 20 years of my life I didn't think music is a knowledge for me.

✓ In the past 20 years of my life, I didn't think music was knowledge for me.

时间状语用'in the past'更合适，且主句为过去时，后半句谓语也应使用过去时'was'。

× But after I came across a singer who I very love him and I started to think music is knowledge is professional section.

✓ But after I came across a singer whom I really love, I started to think music is a professional field.

'who I very love him'结构错误，应为'whom I really love'；'knowledge is professional section'表达不准确，改为'a professional field'更合适。

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing for?

此句无语法错误，符合语法规范。

× I want to learn how to sing correctly and make my voice to be pleasant.

✓ I want to learn how to sing correctly and make my voice pleasant.

'make my voice to be pleasant'中'to be'多余，正确表达为'make my voice pleasant'。

× And if one day I can sing very well, I will sing for myself.

✓ And if one day I can sing very well, I will sing for myself.

此句无语法错误，符合语法规范。

× It's not only for myself, it's for my effort.

✓ It's not only for myself; it's for my effort.

句子结构正确，但建议用分号连接两个独立分句，使表达更清晰。

× Yes, I agree with that.

✓ Yes, I agree with that.

此句无语法错误，符合语法规范。

× For example in concert. Fans not only thing.

✓ For example, in concerts, fans not only think.

原句断句错误，且'thing'应为'think'，需要调整句子结构和拼写。

× The singer to sing.

✓ The singer sings.

原句缺少谓语动词，导致句子不完整，需补充谓语。

× But also. M. Sing them self.

✓ But also sing themselves.

原句断句错误，且'them self'应为'themselves'，需要调整句子结构和代词形式。

× And from that it can bring hapiness.

✓ And from that, it can bring happiness.

原句缺少逗号且'hapiness'拼写错误，应为'happiness'。