Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to speak more clearly and use correct vocabulary, such as 'singing' instead of 'seeing' or 'sync'. Structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, avoiding filler words and redundancy. For example, say: 'Yes, I like singing because it helps me express my emotions and relax in my free time.'

Example: Yes, I enjoy singing because it allows me to express my emotions and helps me relax whenever I have free time.

Suggestion: Focus on clear pronunciation and correct vocabulary, such as 'singing' instead of 'seeing'. Use a clear structure: start with a direct answer, then add details. Avoid confusing phrases and questions back to the examiner. For example: 'No, I haven't formally learned singing, but I plan to take a singing course to improve my skills.'

Example: No, I haven't formally learned singing, but I plan to take a singing course soon to improve my abilities.

Suggestion: Answer directly and clearly. Use correct vocabulary and grammar, and avoid incomplete sentences. For example: 'I prefer to sing for myself at first to practice and improve my skills before performing for others.'

Example: I prefer to sing for myself initially to practice and improve my skills before performing in front of others.

Suggestion: Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your thoughts. For example: 'Yes, I agree that singing can bring happiness. For instance, when I feel depressed, I listen to music and enjoy it, which makes me feel more comfortable.'

Example: Yes, I agree that singing can bring happiness. For example, when I feel down, I listen to music and enjoy it, which helps me feel better.

× Well, I, I'm a big fan of seeing an I've uh, what why I see I feel very confortable an I can express my emotions, roll the singing and also I want to sync whenever I have time to just for relaxations an for my.

✓ Well, I, I'm a big fan of singing and I feel very comfortable and I can express my emotions through singing and also I want to sing whenever I have time just for relaxation and for myself.

The word 'seeing' is incorrect here; the correct gerund form is 'singing' to express the activity. Also, 'sync' should be 'sing'. The phrase 'roll the singing' is unclear and likely a mishearing or mispronunciation; 'through singing' is appropriate to express expressing emotions. 'Relaxations an for my' is corrected to 'relaxation and for myself' for clarity and correctness.

× Actually I haven't formally learned seeing an eye I'm but now I'm planned to take uh, seeing cost and then I can show my abilities to others.

✓ Actually, I haven't formally learned singing yet, but now I plan to take a singing course and then I can show my abilities to others.

The phrase 'haven't formally learned seeing an eye' is incorrect; it should be 'haven't formally learned singing yet'. 'I'm planned' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I plan'. 'Seeing cost' should be 'singing course'. These corrections fix verb tense and word choice errors.

× Or are you just do it for my opinions over for my hobby?

✓ Or do you just do it for your own enjoyment or as a hobby?

The original sentence has incorrect modal verb and pronoun usage. 'Are you just do it' should be 'do you just do it'. 'My opinions over for my hobby' is unclear; 'your own enjoyment or as a hobby' is a clearer and grammatically correct expression.

× Actually, no, I not very confident about my singing abilities, so I preferred seeing for myself first to practice and improve my skill.

✓ Actually, no, I am not very confident about my singing abilities, so I prefer singing for myself first to practice and improve my skills.

The sentence lacks the verb 'am' after 'I'. 'Preferred' is past tense but the context suggests present preference, so 'prefer' is correct. 'Seeing' should be 'singing'. 'Skill' should be plural 'skills' to match the context.

× So sensually when I can take a formal 'cause I think I may try to practice before, uh, the.

✓ So essentially, when I can take a formal course, I think I may try to practice before that.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Sensually' is incorrect; 'essentially' is appropriate. 'Take a formal 'cause' should be 'take a formal course'. The sentence is completed with 'before that' to make it grammatically correct and meaningful.

× Well, actually I very agree with that idea because, uh, for from my personal appearance, I think when I feel very depressed, I will try to do nothing and then I put on my music Ann I will enjoy it an that moment will make me feel confortable.

✓ Well, actually I strongly agree with that idea because, from my personal experience, I think when I feel very depressed, I try to do nothing and then I put on my music and I enjoy it and that moment makes me feel comfortable.

'Very agree' is incorrect; 'strongly agree' is correct. 'Personal appearance' should be 'personal experience'. 'I will try to do nothing' is better as 'I try to do nothing' to match habitual action. 'Ann' is a typo for 'and'. 'Will make me feel' is better as 'makes me feel' for present habitual action. 'Confortable' is misspelled; correct spelling is 'comfortable'.