Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 你的回答中有語法錯誤和不自然的表達，建議你用簡單且正確的句子來表達你的想法，並避免冗長或不清楚的句子。可以先直接回答問題，再用一兩句話解釋原因。

Example: To be honest, I don't like singing very much because I think I lack natural talent. Also, I feel a bit awkward when I have to sing in front of others.

Suggestion: 你的回答不夠清楚且有語法錯誤，建議你直接回答是否學過唱歌，並用簡單句子說明經驗或感受，避免使用不正確的詞彙。

Example: I have only learned singing during music classes at school. I don't enjoy singing much, but if I had the chance, I would try to improve.

Suggestion: 回答時要注意語句通順和語法正確，並且用連接詞使句子更連貫。可以先說想為誰唱歌，再說原因，最後表達你的看法。

Example: I would like to sing for my mother because she has done so much for me. Singing is a real way to express emotions, and I want to show my gratitude to her.

Suggestion: 你的回答中有很多不清楚的詞彙和語法錯誤，建議你用簡單明確的句子表達你的想法，並用連接詞使句子更流暢。

Example: Absolutely. For example, many people go to concerts to sing along with the singer and enjoy the positive energy. Music definitely brings happiness to people.

× I didn't prefer singing because I think I don't have lot natural talent for that.

✓ I don't prefer singing because I think I don't have a lot of natural talent for that.

The sentence mixes past tense 'didn't prefer' with present tense 'I think'. Since the speaker is expressing a current opinion, present tense 'don't prefer' is appropriate. Also, 'lot' needs the article 'a' and the preposition 'of' to form 'a lot of'. In English (Taiwan): 動詞時態要一致，這裡表達現在的喜好，應用現在式 'don't prefer'，且 'lot' 前需加 'a' 並搭配 'of'，形成 'a lot of'。

× I'm the whenever I need to see, I will feel a little bit awkward.

✓ I'm the type of person who feels a little bit awkward whenever I need to sing.

The original sentence is unclear and uses 'the' incorrectly. It should specify the type of person and use 'who' as a relative pronoun. Also, 'see' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'sing'. In English (Taiwan): 句子結構不清楚，需明確表達 '我是那種...'，並用關係代名詞 'who'，且 'see' 應為 'sing'。

× Uhm, I have a had the former training session except for the music class at school.

✓ Uhm, I have had some training sessions except for the music class at school.

The phrase 'have a had' is incorrect; it should be 'have had'. Also, 'former' is not appropriate here; 'some' or 'a few' fits better. 'Training session' should be plural if more than one. In English (Taiwan): 'have a had' 是錯誤用法，正確為 'have had'，且 'former' 用錯，應用 'some' 或 'a few'，'training session' 若多於一個需用複數。

× Also, I said I need an English, I don't enjoy singing.

✓ Also, I said I need English, and I don't enjoy singing.

The phrase 'I need an English' is incorrect; 'English' as a language is uncountable and does not take 'an'. Also, the sentence is a run-on and needs a conjunction like 'and'. In English (Taiwan): 'English' 是不可數名詞，不可加不定冠詞 'an'，句子需用連接詞 'and' 連接。

× If I had an opportunity I will give a Chai.

✓ If I had an opportunity, I would give it a try.

The sentence mixes conditional forms incorrectly. The correct second conditional uses 'If I had' + 'would'. Also, 'give a Chai' is likely a mishearing of 'give it a try'. In English (Taiwan): 條件句第二型態應用 'If I had' 搭配 'would'，且 'give a Chai' 應為 'give it a try'。

× Uhm, I would like to sing in front of my mother, UM, because she has to do so much for me on the I would like to show my Greta T. To her.

✓ Uhm, I would like to sing in front of my mother because she has done so much for me, and I would like to show my gratitude to her.

The sentence has unclear pronoun use and incomplete phrases. 'on the' is incorrect and 'Greta T.' is a mishearing of 'gratitude'. Also, 'has to do' should be 'has done' to indicate past actions. In English (Taiwan): 句子不完整且代名詞用錯，'on the' 不合適，'Greta T.' 應為 'gratitude'，動詞時態應用完成式 'has done'。

× I think singing as 1/2 real way to spell emotion.

✓ I think singing is a real way to express emotion.

'1/2' is unclear and likely a mishearing of 'a'. 'Spell' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'express'. Also, the sentence lacks the verb 'is'. In English (Taiwan): '1/2' 應為 'a'，'spell' 用錯，應用 'express'，句子缺少動詞 'is'。

× Absolutely uhm, just Duke how crowned offer people flock to the concern, like sing along with their singer and enjoy the positive energy among the concert, then you can know.

✓ Absolutely, just look at how crowds of people flock to concerts, sing along with their singers, and enjoy the positive energy; then you can understand.

The original sentence is unclear and contains many misheard words: 'Duke' should be 'look', 'crowned offer' should be 'crowds of', 'concern' should be 'concert'. The sentence structure is fragmented and needs rephrasing. In English (Taiwan): 句子結構混亂，多處詞彙誤用，需重組句子並更正詞彙。

× Music absolutely provided a jury.

✓ Music absolutely provides joy.

'Provided a jury' is incorrect and likely a mishearing of 'provides joy'. Also, verb tense should be present simple 'provides' to match the context. In English (Taiwan): 'provided a jury' 是誤用，應為 'provides joy'，動詞時態用現在式 'provides'。