Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to form a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, followed by specific reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Example: Yes, I like singing because it helps me feel better when I am stressed or feeling down. For example, singing my favourite songs can reduce my anxiety and improve my mood.

Suggestion: Your answer is very unclear and does not directly respond to the question. Focus on giving a clear yes or no answer, then add supporting details with correct grammar and vocabulary.

Example: Yes, I have taken singing lessons before to improve my voice. However, I believe that many people can enjoy singing without formal training.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and incomplete. Provide a clear topic sentence stating who you want to sing for, then add details to explain why.

Example: I want to sing for my family and friends because their support motivates me. For instance, singing for my son makes me feel happy and connected to him.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat understandable but lacks clarity and correct grammar. Give a clear opinion and explain your reasons using linking words.

Example: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it allows them to forget their problems temporarily and enjoy the moment.

× Yes, I like singing 'cause I'm when I feel down headed all when I have something that stressed to me, I singing can help to reduce those dreadful feelings.

✓ Yes, I like singing because when I feel downhearted or when I have something that stresses me, singing can help to reduce those dreadful feelings.

The original sentence contains incorrect verb forms and awkward phrasing. 'I'm when I feel down headed all' is incorrect; it should be 'when I feel downhearted'. 'Something that stressed to me' should be 'something that stresses me' to use the correct present tense verb form. Also, 'I singing can help' is incorrect; it should be 'singing can help'. The corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Literally I have a learn 100 thing I didn't eat. Don't need for me and people still need it be 'cause. I can. People don't need to learn how to send in a check now to feed a sound gross.

✓ Literally, I have learned many things. People still need it because I can. People don't need to learn how to sing in a choir now to produce a good sound.

The original sentence has multiple issues including incorrect verb forms and unclear phrasing. 'I have a learn' should be 'I have learned' to use the correct past participle form. 'Didn't eat' is irrelevant and likely a mishearing or error. 'Send in a check' should be 'sing in a choir'. The correction uses proper past tense and clarifies the intended meaning.

× I want to sing for my audience will listen to my son.

✓ I want to sing for my audience who will listen to my song.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and has unclear meaning. 'My son' is likely a mishearing of 'my song'. Also, 'audience will listen to my son' lacks a relative pronoun. Adding 'who' clarifies the sentence structure.

× Oh yeah, yeah, singing can bring happiness to people be 'cause I'm always saying we should temporarily forgot everything.

✓ Oh yeah, singing can bring happiness to people because I always say we should temporarily forget everything.

'Be 'cause' is an incorrect form of 'because'. 'I'm always saying' should be 'I always say' to use the simple present tense for habitual actions. 'Forgot' should be 'forget' to match the modal verb 'should'. These corrections fix conjunction use and verb tense.