Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors, such as "can seen" and "you're in driving." To improve, try to use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise and coherent. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add a reason or feeling with linking words.

Example: I don't particularly enjoy singing because I'm quite shy. However, I do like singing when I'm alone in my car while driving because it makes me feel relaxed and happy.

Suggestion: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and unclear phrases like "couldn't stand a learning anything." To improve, use correct grammar and organize your answer logically with linking words. Also, avoid repeating words unnecessarily and be more specific about your experience.

Example: Yes, I attended music school when I was a child, but I didn't enjoy it because I found learning about music difficult and uninteresting. Therefore, my experience with singing lessons was not successful.

Suggestion: Your answer contains unclear words like "fell Cheyenne humble" and grammatical errors. To improve, use clear vocabulary and correct grammar. Also, answer the question directly with a topic sentence, then add supporting details with linking words.

Example: I prefer not to sing in front of others because I feel shy and lack confidence. Instead, I enjoy singing alone in my car while driving, where I can relax and express myself freely.

Suggestion: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear words like "jajik maladies" and "sending." To improve, use appropriate vocabulary related to the topic and organize your ideas clearly with linking words. Provide specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.

Example: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it helps people feel free and excited. Singing allows us to express our emotions and can motivate us to follow our dreams.

× Well, I'm quite a shy person, so the only situation when I can seen without any hesitation is when I'm alone in my car.

✓ Well, I'm quite a shy person, so the only situation when I can be seen without any hesitation is when I'm alone in my car.

The verb 'seen' is the past participle form and requires an auxiliary verb to form the passive voice. Here, 'can' is a modal verb and should be followed by the base form 'be' plus the past participle 'seen' to form 'can be seen'. The original sentence missed the auxiliary 'be', causing a grammatical error.

× But you're in driving.

✓ But when you're driving.

The phrase 'you're in driving' is incorrect because 'in' is not the correct preposition to use with 'driving' in this context. The correct phrase is 'when you're driving' to indicate the time or condition under which the action happens.

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

Both 'learnt' and 'learned' are past tense forms of 'learn'. However, 'learned' is more commonly used in American English, while 'learnt' is British English. Since the rest of the transcript uses American English conventions, 'learned' is preferred here for consistency.

× I used to go to the music school in my childhood.

✓ I used to go to music school in my childhood.

The phrase 'the music school' implies a specific school, but here it is a general activity. The article 'the' is unnecessary before 'music school' when referring to the activity or type of school in general.

× I couldn't stand a learning anything about music and musicians.

✓ I couldn't stand learning anything about music and musicians.

The article 'a' before 'learning' is incorrect because 'learning' is a gerund here and does not require an article. Removing 'a' corrects the sentence.

× So I used to, but that was very unsuccessful experience.

✓ So I used to, but that was a very unsuccessful experience.

The noun 'experience' is countable and requires an article. The indefinite article 'a' is missing before 'very unsuccessful experience'.

× Well as I said before, I don't like a singing in front of someone because I fell Cheyenne humble and I'm not really confident so that's why I enjoy singing, only staying in my car while driving when I am alone and I can fully relax.

✓ Well, as I said before, I don't like singing in front of someone because I feel shy and humble and I'm not really confident, so that's why I enjoy singing only while staying in my car when I am alone and can fully relax.

Several issues: 'a singing' should be 'singing' without 'a' because 'singing' is a gerund; 'fell' is a typo for 'feel'; 'Cheyenne humble' is incorrect and likely meant 'shy and humble'; 'only staying' should be 'only while staying' for clarity; commas are needed to separate clauses for better readability.

× Yeah, because some of their jajik maladies make us feel thrilled and and free and a certain extent.

✓ Yeah, because some of their joyful melodies make us feel thrilled and free to a certain extent.

The original sentence contains nonsensical words 'jajik maladies' which seem to be a mishearing or typo. Assuming the intended phrase is 'joyful melodies'. Also, 'and and' is a repetition error. 'A certain extent' should be preceded by 'to' to form the correct phrase 'to a certain extent'.

× So sending allows us freedom and follow our dreams.

✓ So singing allows us freedom and helps us follow our dreams.

The word 'sending' is a typo for 'singing'. Also, 'allows us freedom and follow our dreams' is incorrect because 'allows' should be followed by a noun or gerund, and the second verb 'follow' needs a helper verb 'helps us' to be grammatically correct.

× All songs are very motivated and pleasant.

✓ All songs are very motivating and pleasant.

The adjective 'motivated' describes a person who is motivated, but songs cannot be motivated. The correct adjective to describe songs that inspire motivation is 'motivating'.