Chocolate— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Answer wa natural desuga, 'chocolate is sweet' to iu hyougen wa kantan sugiru node, motto specific na hyougen o tsukatte kudasai. Mata, 'a great treat after a long day' no imi o motto kuwashiku setsumei shite kudasai. Tatoeba, dono you ni yasumi ni naru no ka o tsukete kudasai.

Example: Yes, I like eating chocolate because its rich sweetness helps me relax and feel rewarded after a long day of work or study.

Suggestion: Answer ni wa futatabi 'chocolate' ga kurikaesareru node, kotonaru hyougen o tsukatte kudasai. Soshite, 'I feel chocolate makes me have pimple' wa motto shousai ni setsumei shite, riyuu o meikaku ni shite kudasai.

Example: Although I love chocolate, I rarely eat it, usually only once every month or two, because I believe it causes me to break out in pimples.

Suggestion: Tense no tsukaikata ga machigatte imasu. 'I hardly ate chocolate when I was a kid' to shite kudasai. Soshite, 'which I passed from my teeth and my health' wa imi ga wakarinikui node, motto wakariyasui setsumei o shite kudasai.

Example: I hardly ate chocolate when I was a kid because my mom didn't allow me to eat sweets to protect my teeth and health.

Suggestion: Answer ga fukuzatsu de, bunpou no machigai mo arimasu. 'Almost every kid love chocolate' wa 'almost every kid loves chocolate' to shite kudasai. Soshite, 'Secondly because of taste to the advertisement the the marketing of chocolate used for love for romantic thing' wa motto wakariyasui you ni bun o wakete, setsumei shite kudasai.

Example: In my opinion, chocolate is popular worldwide because almost every child loves its sweet taste. Also, advertisements often associate chocolate with love and romance, which makes it more appealing.

Suggestion: 'Milky chocolate' no hyougen wa 'milk chocolate' ga futsuu desu. 'Perfect combine' wa 'perfect combination' to shite kudasai. Mata, 'and and' no kurikaeshi o naosu koto mo taisetsu desu.

Example: I'm very keen on milk chocolate because I love milk and dairy products, so milk chocolate is the perfect combination of milk and cocoa for me.

Suggestion: 'College age gifts' wa imi ga fumei desu. 'Chocolate as gifts' to iu imi de kotaete kudasai. Soshite, 'almost people love chocolate' wa 'almost everyone loves chocolate' to shite kudasai. Bunpou to imi no seikaku-sa o takameru hitsuyou ga arimasu.

Example: I think chocolate is a good gift to give to others. It's my usual choice because almost everyone loves chocolate, and even if they don't, they can share it with their family, children, or partner.

× I hardly eat chocolate when I was a kid because my mom didn't let me to consume sweets which I passed from my teeth and my health.

✓ I hardly ate chocolate when I was a kid because my mom didn't let me consume sweets which harmed my teeth and my health.

The sentence mixes present tense 'eat' with past time 'when I was a kid'. The verb should be in past tense 'ate' to match the time frame. Also, 'didn't let me to consume' is incorrect; 'let' is followed by the base form without 'to'. The phrase 'which I passed from my teeth and my health' is unclear and likely intended to mean sweets harmed teeth and health, so it is corrected to 'which harmed my teeth and my health'.

× In my opinion, chocolate is popular around the world because almost every kid love chocolate.

✓ In my opinion, chocolate is popular around the world because almost every kid loves chocolate.

The subject 'every kid' is singular, so the verb should be singular 'loves' instead of plural 'love' to maintain subject-verb agreement.

× Secondly because of taste to the advertisement the the marketing of chocolate used for love for romantic thing.

✓ Secondly, because of the taste, the advertisement, and the marketing of chocolate used for love and romantic purposes.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper structure. Adding commas and conjunctions clarifies the meaning. 'Love for romantic thing' is vague and corrected to 'love and romantic purposes' for clarity.

× I'm very keen on Milky chocolate because I love milk and love to consume dairy products, so Milky chocolate for me is the perfect combine of milk and and cocoa.

✓ I'm very keen on milky chocolate because I love milk and dairy products, so milky chocolate for me is the perfect combination of milk and cocoa.

'Milky' should not be capitalized unless it is a brand name. 'Combine' is a verb; the correct noun is 'combination'. Also, 'and and' is a typo corrected to a single 'and'.

× I usually eat only once every month or every two months because I feel chocolate makes me have pimple.

✓ I usually eat chocolate only once every month or every two months because I feel chocolate makes me have pimples.

'Pimple' is countable and usually plural when referring to the condition generally, so 'pimples' is correct. Also, 'eat only once every month' is acceptable but 'eat chocolate only once every month' is clearer.

× It's good to use college age gifts to others.

✓ It's good to use chocolate as gifts for others.

'College age gifts' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo for 'chocolate gifts'. Also, 'to others' is better expressed as 'for others' when giving gifts.