Chocolate— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to avoid repeating the same idea (e.g., 'sweet things') and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and correct grammar errors such as 'chocolate is comes' to 'chocolate comes'.

Example: Yes, I really enjoy eating chocolate because it tastes sweet and helps me relax. Moreover, chocolate comes in various flavors, so I can always choose the one I like best.

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more concise and use linking words like 'so' or 'therefore' to connect ideas. Also, avoid informal expressions like 'kinda sad' in formal speaking.

Example: I eat chocolate twice a week because my mom says that eating too much can affect my brain function and academic performance, so she limits me to that amount.

Suggestion: Use past tense consistently ('ate' instead of 'eat') and avoid incomplete sentences. Also, avoid mentioning stealing as it may be inappropriate. Provide clear and complete answers with linking words.

Example: Yes, I often ate chocolate when I was a kid because I liked its sweet taste and variety of flavors. I used to take some from my mom's bag without asking.

Suggestion: Improve grammar and sentence structure, and use linking words like 'firstly' and 'secondly' correctly. Also, avoid awkward phrases like 'people have stressful can eat them'.

Example: I think chocolate is popular worldwide firstly because it comes in many flavors, so everyone can find their favorite. Secondly, chocolate helps to relieve stress, so people often eat it when they feel stressed.

Suggestion: Use linking words properly and avoid comma splices. Also, explain ideas clearly and avoid informal phrases like 'let me have better performance'.

Example: My favorite flavor is dark chocolate because I enjoy its bitter taste and texture. Additionally, I believe it helps me stay awake during classes and exams, which improves my performance.

Suggestion: Improve grammar by saying 'chocolate is not suitable for everyone's taste' and use linking words like 'firstly' and 'secondly' correctly. Also, try to make your answer more natural and concise.

Example: No, I don't think chocolate is a good gift because firstly, it can melt in hot weather, especially in summer. Secondly, chocolate may not suit everyone's taste.

× chocolate is comes in different flavors so I can choose between flavors which I like.

✓ chocolate comes in different flavors so I can choose between flavors which I like.

The verb 'comes' should be in the base form without 'is' because 'comes' is the simple present tense third person singular form. Using 'is comes' is incorrect; the correct form is 'comes'.

× she limits me to eat chocolate twice a week which is kinda sad for me.

✓ she limits me to eating chocolate twice a week which is kinda sad for me.

After the verb 'limit', the correct form is the gerund ('-ing' form) rather than the infinitive 'to eat'. Therefore, 'to eating' is correct here.

× Yes, I often eat chocolate when I was a kid because when I was little I liked the sweet taste and the multi flavours of the chocolate.

✓ Yes, I often ate chocolate when I was a kid because when I was little I liked the sweet taste and the multiple flavours of the chocolate.

The action happened in the past, so the verb should be in the past tense 'ate' instead of 'eat'. Also, 'multi' is informal; 'multiple' is more appropriate here.

× which every people can choose their favorite flavours

✓ which everyone can choose their favorite flavours

The phrase 'every people' is incorrect; the correct pronoun is 'everyone' to refer to all people individually.

× so people have stressful can eat them.

✓ so people who are stressed can eat them.

The phrase 'people have stressful' is incorrect. The correct form is 'people who are stressed' to describe people experiencing stress.

× I think chocolate is not suit for anyone's taste.

✓ I think chocolate is not suitable for anyone's taste.

The verb 'suit' should be used as 'suitable' adjective with the preposition 'for'. 'Not suit for' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'not suitable for'.