Chocolate— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains some grammatical errors. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific reasons with linking words. Avoid redundancy and keep sentences concise.

Example: Yes, I enjoy eating chocolate because I love its sweet flavour. Since I was young, I have often eaten chocolate as a snack whenever I felt hungry.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and contains unclear expressions. Try to answer directly and clearly, using simple and natural language. Avoid exaggerations that may confuse the listener.

Example: I eat chocolate every day because I really enjoy its taste and it makes me feel happy.

Suggestion: Your answer is mostly clear but could be improved by using correct tense and linking words to make it more natural and coherent.

Example: Yes, I often ate chocolate when I was a kid. I loved it so much that my parents were worried because I ate too much every day.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to give a clear opinion with reasons and use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Example: I think chocolate is popular worldwide because it tastes delicious and can be addictive. Also, cacao is a valuable ingredient, which makes chocolate special.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Try to give a clear topic sentence and explain your preference with specific reasons using linking words.

Example: My favourite flavour is dark chocolate because it is less sweet than milk chocolate, which I sometimes find too sugary.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to give a clear opinion and support it with specific reasons, using linking words to make your answer coherent.

Example: Yes, I think chocolate makes a good gift, especially in winter. Many people enjoy receiving chocolates from well-known brands as presents.

× I like eating chocolate because I love the sweet flavor and since when I was young I love to eat snack and chocolate whenever I have I felt hungry.

✓ I like eating chocolate because I love the sweet flavour and since I was young I have loved to eat snacks and chocolate whenever I felt hungry.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. 'Since when I was young I love' should be 'since I was young I have loved' to correctly express an action starting in the past and continuing to the present. Also, 'snack' should be plural 'snacks' to match the context.

× I like eating chocolate because I love the sweet flavor and since when I was young I love to eat snack and chocolate whenever I have I felt hungry.

✓ I like eating chocolate because I love the sweet flavour and since I was young I have loved to eat snacks and chocolate whenever I felt hungry.

The word 'snack' should be plural 'snacks' because it refers to multiple instances of eating small amounts of food.

× Actually every day without chocolate I feel like I cannot live because chocolate flavor is like Part 1 of my part or create one of my body part.

✓ Actually, every day without chocolate I feel like I cannot live because the chocolate flavour is like a part of my body.

The phrase 'Part 1 of my part or create one of my body part' is unclear and grammatically incorrect. It should be simplified to 'a part of my body' to convey the intended meaning. Also, 'chocolate flavor' needs the definite article 'the'.

× Actually every day without chocolate I feel like I cannot live because chocolate flavor is like Part 1 of my part or create one of my body part.

✓ Actually, every day without chocolate I feel like I cannot live because the chocolate flavour is like a part of my body.

The noun phrase 'chocolate flavor' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific flavour known to both speaker and listener.

× Yes I did. I loved chocolate. That my parents often worried about me because I'm eating too much chocolate every day.

✓ Yes, I did. I loved chocolate. My parents often worried about me because I was eating too much chocolate every day.

The phrase 'That my parents often worried' is incomplete and should be 'My parents often worried'. Also, 'I'm eating' is present continuous, but the context is past, so it should be 'I was eating'.

× Because I think, I think because chocolate flavor has some addiction. So and the the cacao it's very getting expensive, so many.

✓ Because I think chocolate flavour is addictive. Also, cacao is becoming very expensive, so many people...

The phrase 'chocolate flavor has some addiction' is incorrect; 'chocolate flavour is addictive' is better. The double 'the the cacao' is an article error. 'It's very getting expensive' is incorrect; 'is becoming very expensive' is correct.

× My favorite flavor is a dark. I love sweet but sometimes I feel like too much if I eat like milk flavor or yes.

✓ My favourite flavour is dark chocolate. I love sweet flavours but sometimes I feel it's too much if I eat milk chocolate.

'A dark' is incorrect; it should be 'dark chocolate'. 'I love sweet' is incomplete; it should be 'I love sweet flavours'. The sentence structure is awkward and needs rephrasing for clarity.

× I think so, especially in winter time and there are many expensive brand exist. So then usually people love to eat the chocolate. It doesn't. Chocolate doesn't.

✓ I think so, especially in winter, and there are many expensive brands that exist. Usually, people love to eat chocolate. It doesn't... Chocolate doesn't...

'In winter time' should be 'in winter'. 'Many expensive brand exist' should be 'many expensive brands that exist'. The last sentences are incomplete and unclear; they need completion or removal.