Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Ответ студента содержит грамматические ошибки и неестественные выражения, что снижает его понятность. Рекомендуется использовать правильные времена и более чёткую структуру предложения, избегая избыточности.

Example: I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget what happened the day before. Therefore, I sometimes need someone to remind me about important matters.

Suggestion: Ответ содержит много грамматических ошибок и неясных выражений, что затрудняет понимание. Следует использовать правильные времена, более чёткие формулировки и связующие слова для логичности.

Example: Yes, when I was nine, I forgot my phone at the playground. After realizing it, I went back to get it, but it was gone. I understood that someone had stolen it.

Suggestion: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткие формулировки. Рекомендуется использовать правильные формы глаголов и более точные выражения, а также связующие слова для плавности речи.

Example: To remember important things in my daily life, I think I need to eat more healthy foods and fruits because they help improve my memory and prevent me from forgetting important matters.

Suggestion: Ответ достаточно понятен и логичен, но можно улучшить связность с помощью дополнительных связующих слов и более разнообразной лексики.

Example: Sometimes, I need to be in complete silence and think carefully. When I do that, I can remember what I forgot or where I left something. Additionally, other people sometimes notice and kindly remind me, which helps a lot.

× Now I'm not very good at memorizing because I could forgetting things that would have happened yesterday so I need someone to remind me sometimes things.

✓ Now I'm not very good at memorizing because I could forget things that happened yesterday, so I need someone to remind me of things sometimes.

The phrase 'could forgetting' is incorrect because after modal verbs like 'could', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. Also, 'would have happened' is unnecessary here; simple past 'happened' fits better. Additionally, 'remind me sometimes things' is awkward; it should be 'remind me of things sometimes' to use the correct preposition and word order.

× Of course when I was 9 I forget my phone at the playground after releasing it, I back to to take my phone but my phone just appear and I understand that someone stole my phone.

✓ Of course, when I was 9 I forgot my phone at the playground after leaving it. I went back to take my phone but it was gone, and I understood that someone had stolen my phone.

The verb 'forget' should be in past tense 'forgot' to match the past time reference. 'After releasing it' is incorrect; 'after leaving it' is appropriate. 'I back to to take my phone' is ungrammatical; it should be 'I went back to take my phone'. 'My phone just appear' should be 'it was gone' or 'it disappeared'. 'I understand' should be past tense 'I understood' to maintain past narrative. Also, 'someone stole' should be past perfect 'someone had stolen' to indicate an action completed before another past action.

× To remember good things in my daily life, I think I need to eat more healthy foods and fruits that helps me in to improve my memory and don't forgetting the important things.

✓ To remember good things in my daily life, I think I need to eat more healthy foods and fruits that help me to improve my memory and not forget important things.

The phrase 'helps me in to improve' is incorrect; it should be 'help me to improve' or simply 'help me improve'. Also, 'don't forgetting' is incorrect; it should be 'not forget' to correctly negate the verb. The preposition 'in' is unnecessary here.

× To remember good things in my daily life, I think I need to eat more healthy foods and fruits that helps me in to improve my memory and don't forgetting the important things.

✓ To remember good things in my daily life, I think I need to eat more healthy foods and fruits that help me to improve my memory and not forget important things.

The phrase 'don't forgetting' is incorrect because after 'don't' the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form.

× To remember good things in my daily life, I think I need to eat more healthy foods and fruits that helps me in to improve my memory and don't forgetting the important things.

✓ To remember good things in my daily life, I think I need to eat more healthy foods and fruits that help me to improve my memory and not forget important things.

The verb 'helps' should be 'help' to agree with the plural subject 'foods and fruits'.

× Sometimes I just need to be in complete silence and think carefully.

✓ Sometimes I just need to be in complete silence and think carefully.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× When I do that I can remember what I forgot or where I left something.

✓ When I do that, I can remember what I forgot or where I left something.

The sentence is mostly correct; adding a comma after 'that' improves clarity but is optional. The verb tenses are appropriate.

× Also sometimes other people notice it and kindly tell me, which helps me a lot.

✓ Also, sometimes other people notice it and kindly tell me, which helps me a lot.

The sentence is correct; adding a comma after 'Also' improves readability but is optional.