Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but a bit repetitive and could be more concise. Try to avoid repeating the same idea and use linking words to make your response smoother. Also, include a specific example to enrich your answer.

Example: I'm not very good at memorising things, especially people's names and faces, so I often have to remind myself by associating names with certain features.

Suggestion: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to use past tense correctly and organise your answer with linking words to improve coherence. Also, be more specific about the situation and its consequences.

Example: Yes, once I forgot to close the door when we left the house, and when we returned, we realised it was unlocked, which made me feel quite worried about security.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Also, avoid awkward phrasing and finish your sentences fully.

Example: I usually make a daily plan every morning, which helps me remember the tasks I need to complete throughout the day.

Suggestion: Your answer is good but could be more fluent and concise. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, try to use varied vocabulary to describe your methods.

Example: To remember important things, I usually set reminders on my phone or write notes and keep them in my purse. Additionally, I ask my husband to remind me if I happen to forget.

× one time I forget to close the door when I we were leaving for out

✓ one time I forgot to close the door when we were leaving out

The verb 'forget' should be in the past tense 'forgot' to match the past time frame indicated by 'one time'. Also, 'I we were leaving for out' is incorrect; it should be 'we were leaving out' to be grammatically correct and clear.

× So when we come back we got to know that I haven't closed the door which is which was one of the most important thing I should do before leaving house

✓ So when we came back we found out that I hadn't closed the door, which was one of the most important things I should do before leaving the house

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. 'Come back' should be past tense 'came back' to match 'got to know' which should be 'found out'. 'Haven't closed' should be past perfect 'hadn't closed' to indicate an action before another past action. Also, 'thing' should be plural 'things' and 'leaving house' needs the definite article 'the' before 'house'.

× I we were leaving for out

✓ we were leaving out

The phrase 'leaving for out' is incorrect. The correct preposition here is 'out' without 'for'. So it should be 'we were leaving out'.

× before leaving house

✓ before leaving the house

The noun 'house' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific house, so it should be 'before leaving the house'.

× Every morning I recall what should I do within that day and what are the tasks I should complete within the day

✓ Every morning I recall what I should do that day and what tasks I should complete

The sentence incorrectly uses question word order 'what should I do' in a statement. It should be 'what I should do'. Also, 'within that day' is awkward; 'that day' is more natural. 'What are the tasks' should be 'what tasks' to fit the statement structure.