Part 1
Examiner
Are you good at memorising things?
Candidate
Yes, I'm especially when it comes to interesting things. For example, if my friends tell me some gossip, I can remember details even after a long time. I guess I have a good memory for things that attract my interest.
Examiner
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Candidate
Yes I have, once I forgot to pick up a friend from the airport because I'm really busy that day and just lost track of time. It is very pretty embarrassing but luckily my friend understand.
Examiner
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Candidate
I'll need to remember my study test. As a student, I have a lot assessment and exam to repeat. I also need to remember important dates like project deadlines.
Examiner
How do you remember important things?
Candidate
I use A to do list and set reminders on my phone. This way I can stay organized my areas for everything I need to do. Finally, I don't forget anything important.
Are you good at memorising things?
Score: 75.0Suggestion: 回答时语法和表达不够完整,句子结构不够自然。建议注意完整表达观点,避免语法错误,并且用更自然的表达方式。
Example: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things, especially when they are interesting to me. For instance, if my friends share some gossip, I can remember the details for a long time because it captures my attention.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够准确的问题。建议注意时态一致,主谓一致,并且用更准确的词汇表达情感。
Example: Yes, I have. Once, I forgot to pick up a friend from the airport because I was very busy that day and lost track of time. It was quite embarrassing, but fortunately, my friend understood.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不够清晰。建议注意名词复数形式和句子结构,表达时更准确和连贯。
Example: I need to remember my study tests. As a student, I have many assessments and exams to prepare for. Besides, I also have to keep track of important dates like project deadlines.
How do you remember important things?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: 回答中存在语法和表达不自然的问题。建议注意冠词使用,句子结构和逻辑连接,使表达更流畅。
Example: I use a to-do list and set reminders on my phone. This way, I can stay organized and keep track of everything I need to do. As a result, I rarely forget anything important.
× Yes, I'm especially when it comes to interesting things.
✓ Yes, I am especially good at it when it comes to interesting things.
句子中缺少形容词或名词来说明“especially”修饰的内容,需补充“good at it”使句子完整。
× luckily my friend understand.
✓ luckily my friend understands.
主语是单数“my friend”,谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“understands”。
× because I'm really busy that day and just lost track of time.
✓ because I was really busy that day and just lost track of time.
描述过去的事情,动词时态应使用过去时,“I'm”应改为“I was”。
× I have a lot assessment and exam to repeat.
✓ I have a lot of assessments and exams to repeat.
“a lot”后应加介词“of”,且“assessment”和“exam”应使用复数形式以匹配“a lot of”。
× I use A to do list and set reminders on my phone.
✓ I use a to-do list and set reminders on my phone.
“to do list”应写作复合名词“to-do list”,且冠词应为小写“a”。
× This way I can stay organized my areas for everything I need to do.
✓ This way I can stay organized in all my areas for everything I need to do.
“organized”后应加介词“in”来连接后面的名词短语,且“my areas”前应加“all”使表达更完整。