Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors, such as confusing 'memorising' with 'reminding'. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, and use correct vocabulary. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. For example, you can say: "I am not very good at memorising things, so I usually set alarms or ask my mother to remind me."

Example: I am not very good at memorising things, so I usually set alarms or ask my mother to remind me. This helps me avoid forgetting important tasks. For instance, I set an alarm for my appointments and deadlines.

Suggestion: Your answer provides some details but lacks clarity and correct grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and be specific about what you forgot. Also, avoid repetition and keep sentences concise. For example, you can say: "Yes, last week I forgot my doctor's appointment because I was worried about a skin rash. My father reminded me to book an appointment with our family doctor."

Example: Yes, last week I forgot my doctor's appointment because I was worried about a skin rash. My father reminded me to book an appointment with our family doctor. I felt anxious about the rash, which made me forget the appointment.

Suggestion: Your answer is repetitive and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, and use linking words to explain your methods. For example, you can say: "In my daily life, I need to remember tasks and appointments. Therefore, I set alarms and ask my mother to remind me, which are effective methods."

Example: In my daily life, I need to remember tasks and appointments. Therefore, I set alarms and ask my mother to remind me, which are effective methods. These help me stay organised and avoid forgetting important things.

Suggestion: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'demanding things'. Use correct vocabulary and structure your answer with a topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. For example, you can say: "I remember important things by setting alarms because technology helps me stay organised. Additionally, I ask my mother to remind me when necessary."

Example: I remember important things by setting alarms because technology helps me stay organised. Additionally, I ask my mother to remind me when necessary. These methods ensure I do not forget important tasks or events.

× To be honest, I'm not good at reminding things.

✓ To be honest, I'm not good at remembering things.

The verb 'remember' is the correct verb to use when talking about recalling information. 'Reminding' means causing someone else to remember, which is not the intended meaning here.

× I often forget my thing so I set alarms to remind my things as well as I ask my mom to remind thing.

✓ I often forget my things, so I set alarms to remind me of things, and I also ask my mom to remind me.

The word 'thing' should be plural 'things' when referring to multiple items. Also, 'remind my things' is incorrect; it should be 'remind me of things' to indicate the person being reminded.

× It's very bad for me to.

✓ It's very bad for me too.

The word 'to' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'too' to express 'also' or 'as well'.

× Yes, last week I forgot my about my appointment.

✓ Yes, last week I forgot about my appointment.

The phrase 'forgot my about' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'forgot about' when referring to forgetting something.

× It's appointment with doctor.

✓ It's an appointment with the doctor.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'an' before 'appointment' and the definite article 'the' before 'doctor' to specify the noun properly.

× Actually my skin was patched so I was scared of it.

✓ Actually, my skin had patches, so I was scared of it.

The phrase 'was patched' is incorrect; 'had patches' correctly describes the condition of the skin. Also, a comma is needed after 'Actually'.

× Then my father suggested me to book an appointment with my family doctor.

✓ Then my father suggested that I book an appointment with my family doctor.

The verb 'suggest' is followed by a clause with 'that' and the base form of the verb, not by an object pronoun plus infinitive.

× That was the thing I forget.

✓ That was the thing I forgot.

The verb 'forget' should be in the past tense 'forgot' to match the past time frame.

× I was very worry about my problems so I don't know how it was.

✓ I was very worried about my problems, so I didn't know how it was.

The adjective 'worry' should be the past participle 'worried' to describe the feeling. Also, 'don't know' should be past tense 'didn't know' to maintain tense consistency.

× Usually I set alarms, it gives me remind to things what I have done in my routines as well as I ask my mom to remind me thing.

✓ Usually, I set alarms; they remind me of the things I have to do in my routine, and I also ask my mom to remind me of things.

The sentence has pronoun errors: 'it' should be 'they' referring to alarms, and 'remind to things' should be 'remind me of things'. Also, 'thing' should be plural 'things'.

× I believe these are the best ways to remind things.

✓ I believe these are the best ways to remember things.

The verb 'remind' is used incorrectly here; 'remember' is the correct verb when talking about recalling things oneself.

× I remembered important things by setting alarms.

✓ I remember important things by setting alarms.

The present tense 'remember' is appropriate here because the question is about a habitual action, not a past event.

× Nowadays technology can help us by demanding things as well as I ask my mom to remind me the important things.

✓ Nowadays, technology can help us by reminding us of things, and I also ask my mom to remind me of important things.

The word 'demanding' is incorrect; the correct word is 'reminding'. Also, 'remind me the important things' should be 'remind me of important things'.