Memory— Part 1 Report
Conversation
Part 1
Examiner
Are you good at memorising things?
Candidate
Using things Unfortunately, I'm not very good at memorizing things because after I gave a birth to my son, my memory has significantly decre declined, which makes it difficult for me to remember details. For example, I.
Examiner
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Candidate
Yes, I have forgotten something important before for example, for example, last month I forgot an important anniversary with my husband, which made him very upset upset because that day was special to both of us I felt really sorry and promised to be more careful in.
Examiner
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Candidate
In my daily life, it is very important for me to remember to bring my kids when I leave the house because I don't want to get locked out. I would also never forget to eat breakfast because it gives me energy for the whole day.
Examiner
How do you remember important things?
Candidate
When I have some important things I would write down on the paper or uh, take at, take acid, save them as nodes in my phone. Uh, for example, I have some important anniversary I am not good at, remember.
Evaluation
Overall
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: 回答不够连贯且有语法错误，且句子过长且不完整。建议简化句子结构，避免重复和语法错误，并补充具体例子。
Example: I'm not very good at memorising things, especially after giving birth to my son. For example, I often forget small details like where I put my keys.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 回答中有重复词汇，句子结构不完整，缺少连贯的连接词。建议避免重复，使用连接词使表达更流畅，并完整表达情感和承诺。
Example: Yes, I have forgotten something important. For example, last month I forgot my wedding anniversary, which made my husband very upset. I felt sorry and promised to be more careful in the future.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Score: 75.0Suggestion: 回答较为完整，但可以使用更多连接词使句子更连贯，同时丰富细节。建议增加连接词并具体说明原因。
Example: In my daily life, I need to remember to bring my kids when I leave the house because I don't want to get locked out. Also, I always eat breakfast since it provides me with energy for the whole day.
How do you remember important things?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: 回答中有语音错误和表达不清，句子不完整。建议清晰表达方法，避免口语填充词，并举具体例子。
Example: When I have important things to remember, I write them down on paper or save notes on my phone. For example, I record important anniversaries to make sure I don't forget them.
Grammar
× after I gave a birth to my son
✓ after I gave birth to my son
“give birth”是固定搭配，不能加冠词“a”。“a birth”是错误用法，应去掉“a”。
× my memory has significantly decre declined
✓ my memory has significantly declined
“decre declined”是拼写错误，应为“declined”。
× I have forgotten something important before for example, for example, last month I forgot an important anniversary with my husband
✓ I have forgotten something important before. For example, last month I forgot an important anniversary with my husband
句子中“for example”重复且缺少句号，需分句并去重。
× which made him very upset upset because that day was special to both of us
✓ which made him very upset because that day was special to both of us
“upset”重复，应去掉多余的一个。
× I would write down on the paper or uh, take at, take acid, save them as nodes in my phone
✓ I would write them down on paper or, uh, take notes, save them as notes in my phone
“take at, take acid”是错误表达，应为“take notes”。“write down on the paper”应为“write them down on paper”。
× I have some important anniversary I am not good at, remember
✓ I have some important anniversaries I am not good at remembering
“anniversary”应为复数“anniversaries”，且“remember”应用动名词形式“remembering”。
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