Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Try to avoid hesitation sounds like 'a a a' and finish your sentences fully. Use linking words to connect ideas and clarify your point. For example, explain how understanding helps you remember better.

Example: To be honest, I'm not very good at memorising things. For instance, whenever I try to memorise a poem by just reading it, I often forget it quickly. However, when I take time to understand the meaning, it helps me remember it much better.

Suggestion: Your answer has some good content but contains some grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'richardly angry' and 'put it on my daughter'. Try to use correct vocabulary and grammar, and organise your answer logically with linking words.

Example: Yes, I once forgot my daughter's birthday last year, and she was really angry with me. However, I made it up to her by taking her out and buying a present. Since then, I have made sure to remember important dates carefully.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but a bit confusing due to awkward phrasing. Try to use clearer sentences and linking words to explain why these items are important to remember.

Example: There are several things I need to remember every day, but the most important are my mobile phone, wallet, and house keys. Remembering these helps me stay organised and focus on my work and daily tasks.

Suggestion: Your answer is incomplete and a bit repetitive. Try to complete your sentences and use linking words to explain your method clearly and logically.

Example: To remember important things, I write them down in my diary or To Do List. This helps me review them regularly and ensures that I complete all my tasks effectively.

× I'm pretty bad in memorizing things.

✓ I'm pretty bad at memorizing things.

The correct preposition to use with 'bad' in this context is 'at', not 'in'. We say 'bad at something' to indicate difficulty with an activity.

× whenever I read to memorize maybe a a a poem I often forget everything.

✓ whenever I read to memorize maybe a poem, I often forget everything.

The phrase contains a repeated article 'a a a' which is incorrect. Only one article 'a' is needed before the noun 'poem'. Also, a comma is added for clarity.

× But when I read it and understand it, it's gives me more room to.

✓ But when I read it and understand it, it gives me more room to.

The verb 'gives' should agree with the singular subject 'it'. The contraction 'it's' (it is) is incorrect here; it should be 'it' followed by 'gives'.

× Yes, I forgot my daughter's birthday.

✓ Yes, I forgot my daughter's birthday.

This sentence is correct in past tense and needs no correction.

× my daughter was richardly angry with me

✓ my daughter was really angry with me

The word 'richardly' is not a correct adverb. The correct adverb to express intensity here is 'really'.

× but I was able to make it up to her to take her out and bought a present for her.

✓ but I was able to make it up to her by taking her out and buying a present for her.

To maintain tense consistency and correct verb forms, 'to take' and 'bought' should be changed to gerunds 'taking' and 'buying' after 'make it up to her by'.

× But today I've really put it on my daughter to always remember it.

✓ But today I've really put it on my daughter to always remember her birthday.

The pronoun 'it' is vague here; specifying 'her birthday' clarifies what needs to be remembered.

× There are several things to remember every day, but the most crucial ones that would never make that can never do without is my mobile, my wallet, and my house key.

✓ There are several things to remember every day, but the most crucial ones that I can never do without are my mobile, my wallet, and my house key.

The sentence has subject-verb agreement errors and unclear phrasing. 'Ones' is plural, so the verb should be 'are'. Also, 'would never make that' is incorrect and replaced with 'I can never do without' for clarity.

× Because it helps me stay organized and focus on my work and my task.

✓ Because they help me stay organized and focus on my work and my tasks.

The pronoun 'it' is singular but refers to multiple items (mobile, wallet, house key), so it should be plural 'they'. Also, 'task' should be plural to match 'work'.

× Well, for me not to forget vital information, I put them on my diary or my To Do List.

✓ Well, to avoid forgetting vital information, I put it in my diary or my To Do List.

The original sentence is awkward. 'For me not to forget' is better expressed as 'to avoid forgetting'. Also, 'put them on my diary' is incorrect; 'put it in my diary' is correct because 'information' is singular and 'diary' takes 'in'.

× This enables me to always remember them and go through it for me to be effective to ensure that I accomplish all of them, for instance whenever I'm going for.

✓ This enables me to always remember them and go through them to be effective and ensure that I accomplish all of them, for instance whenever I'm going out.

The pronouns 'them' and 'it' were inconsistently used. 'Go through it' should be 'go through them' to refer to multiple items. The sentence was incomplete and awkward; 'going for' is incomplete and changed to 'going out' for clarity.