Memory— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答不够自然且表达不清晰，语法和用词存在错误。建议简化句子结构，直接表达观点，并使用正确的词汇和语法。

Example: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. I find it easier to remember important information when I understand it deeply or relate it to something meaningful.

Suggestion: 回答较为完整，但句子结构不够流畅，存在语法错误。建议使用连词使句子更连贯，并注意单复数和介词的正确使用。

Example: No, I haven't forgotten anything important because I usually write notes and stick them on my refrigerator to remind myself. Sometimes, I also tell my parents so they can help me remember.

Suggestion: 回答不够连贯，句子不完整且语法错误较多。建议使用完整句子，增加连接词，并明确表达意思。

Example: The most important thing I need to remember is my class schedule. As a university student, I don't have classes every day, only on Wednesdays and Thursdays, so I have to remind myself not to miss them.

Suggestion: 回答表达不够自然，语法和用词有误。建议使用更自然的表达方式，注意冠词和动词形式的正确使用。

Example: As I mentioned before, I stick important notes on the refrigerator, and I also tell my parents about them. This helps me remember better, and they can remind me if I forget.

× No, I'm not good at it compared to memorizing strictly.

✓ No, I'm not good at it compared to strict memorization.

这里'memorizing strictly'的表达不自然，应该用名词形式'strict memorization'来表达'严格记忆'，因为前面用的是介词'at'，后面需要名词形式。

× I prefer to some critical chance to help me memorize matters.

✓ I prefer to have some critical chances to help me memorize matters.

动词'prefer'后面需要接不定式或名词短语，原句缺少动词'have'，且'chance'应使用复数'chances'表示多个机会。

× I usually write the important matters down on a note and attach on my refrigerators to remind me.

✓ I usually write the important matters down on a note and attach it to my refrigerator to remind me.

动词'attach'后应接宾语和介词'to'，表示把便条贴到冰箱上；'refrigerators'应为单数'refrigerator'，因为通常指家里的冰箱。

× Or sometimes I will talk to my parents.

✓ Sometimes I will talk to my parents.

句首的'Or'多余，且不符合语境，应去掉。

× The most important thing is my class arrangement. University student so I don't have lessons every day.

✓ The most important thing is my class arrangement. I am a university student, so I don't have lessons every day.

第二句缺少主语和谓语，导致句子结构不完整，应补充完整。

× Just on Wednesday and Thursday, so I have to remind me to avoid missing.

✓ I only have classes on Wednesday and Thursday, so I have to remind myself to avoid missing them.

'remind me'应为'remind myself'，因为主语和宾语是同一人，需用反身代词；'missing'后应加宾语'them'指代课程。

× As I mentioned before, attaching important things to refrigerator is one of the main ways and the another one is tell the things to my parents.

✓ As I mentioned before, attaching important things to the refrigerator is one of the main ways, and the other one is telling the things to my parents.

'to refrigerator'缺少定冠词'the'；'the another one'应为'the other one'；'tell'应改为动名词'telling'以保持并列结构一致。

× This not only can deepen my memories but also they will remind me.

✓ This can not only deepen my memories but also help them remind me.

原句中'they'指代不明，且句子结构不清晰，应调整句子使主语和谓语明确，表达更流畅。